Big Ben

byJayLikestoRead©

Later that night, I did get him to tell me a fantasy. Next week we're going to pretend he's failing my German class. We could do it tomorrow, but I need time to find a sexy Gestapo uniform and borrow an opera CD from the library.

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Allow me to indulge some followers who read my earlier story "Like a Brother". Yes, this is a similar story. My original version of that story was rejected because the main character's fantasy took place while she was underage. I tried adapting it to satisfy Literotica's criteria, but I'm unsatisfied with the results. This is the new story that I should have written instead of publishing the rewrite.

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by prop6902/17/17

Even though similar,the writing was excellent

Liked the fact that you had him wait and SHE WAS HIS FANTASY

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