Then something unexpected happened. As I walked through the open air parking lot, I saw The Girl.
She was just there, over one row of cars and walking, playing with the keychain in her hand. She had her hair down now, and was wearing a red long-sleeved t-shirt under a puffy black vest. I looked at her for a few seconds to be sure I wasn't mistaken, but I was pretty positive.
"Hey," I called out. The lot wasn't busy, and she heard me easily and looked over.
"Yeah?"
I cut between cars into her lane and smiled as I walked. "I think we might be neighbors. I live off 191, near Gallatin Peak. Pretty sure I saw you out in the woods with a gorgeous rifle. I'm Nate."
She smiled and held out a hand as I reached her. "That sounds like me. Good to meet you, Nate. I'm Rachel."
To Be Continued...
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I realize that for a story called "Big Sky Country," not a lot of this takes place out West. That will change in upcoming chapters, however, as I plan for most of Nate's adventures to occur in terrain rougher than Lake Shore Drive. Thanks for reading, and let me know what you think.
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Big Sky country
Where Eagles Rule the SKY.
Boo fuck. you had a great story going but the ending was anti-climatic, a real downer, for a Rattlesnake.
A very good start
I really enjoyed your story. I love the slow build up, and enjoy the anticipation of what's to come. While I do enjoy reading the hot description's of passion, I hate when they jump right into it. KUDOS for starting off just right for me, and I hope you post many more chapters to this story.more...
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