Birds of Prey - Hetero Edition

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As they made their way down the cramped hallway, Maza took his hand, and once again he noted that it was small enough that he could enclose it entirely in his fist. He felt Coza take the other. She was obviously overjoyed to see him again, but she was still putting on a stoic front, as if nobody would be able to tell. Ayau climbed up onto his back and crossed her arms around his neck, brushing her cheek against his as Xico and Tacka crowded him from behind. It was a good job that the fluffy alien was so light and that the painkillers were finally doing their job.

"I always thought that this would be a day of mourning," Maza said. "But while we did lose some good people, all I feel is relieved that it's over, I feel hopeful. My flock, my male, my friends...they're all alive. You've been at war before Jaeger, is that selfish of me?"

"It's not selfish," he replied, "you're just glad to be alive. I don't think the dead would want you to be miserable on their behalf."

"I suppose not," she admitted. "In our distant past, back when we lived in tribes, the Val'ba'ra'nay were animists. We believed that when a person died, their soul, their essence migrated into the body of an animal. We know better now, of course, but there was comfort in the idea that a bird passing overhead might be a lost loved one watching over you. That amongst a flock of Gue'tra, there might be old friends or curious family members. When the Teth'rak attacked the Betelgeusian Queen...I know it's just superstition, but I still felt as if it was protecting us. Protecting Yilgarn, protecting you."

"It was simply defending its territory against what it perceived to be another large animal," Xico said.

"I know," Maza replied. "But if we still practiced animism, I might argue that the souls of the fallen had some part in it."

"It is a comforting thought," Coza mused, "revenge from beyond the grave."

"I'd fly over its territory and drop a nice big juicy steak for it," Baker said, "but it also tried to eat me. I'd say we're even."

"In any case, we can now enjoy your company for a whole extra year," Maza said gleefully. "That's close to a full Val'ba'ra rotation, I think. We have so much more to show you, you didn't even travel to any other cities in the few days you spent on the surface. There's so much more to see, so many more things to do. I doubt that we could cover everything even if we had ten rotations."

"The first thing I want to do is relax in your lake and take a load off," Jaeger said. "And you guys had better go easy on me for a few weeks until I'm all healed up, especially you, Tacka. I'll get a note from my doctor if I have to."

The little alien gave him a wry smile, Maza and Ayau snickering. Baker wasn't in on the joke, but the implication was obvious enough.

"Don't worry," Ayau purred, "we'll take good care of you. You're a war hero, after all, you've earned a little pampering."

"I never thought I'd say this," he added, "but I think I'm going to enjoy being grounded for a little while."

-THE END-

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 Anonymous2 months ago
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PLEASE MORE WITH THIS STORY

icrawlericrawler7 months ago
Good stuff, but a minor nitpick

The part about "extinct missing link between birds and reptiles" is a bit of a weird statement considering he immediately goes on to use the word "dinosaur-like". Why not just describe it as a dinosaur?

super minor nitpick

 Anonymous7 months ago
Flight Suits

USAF Pilots call their flight suits "Zoom Bags."

 Anonymous7 months ago
A couple things to note:

First off it was an EXCELLENT story and well written. I DID however want to correct a term that you mis-used in the early part of your tale:

When a superior officer countermands an order given by a subordinate to another, they tell them to "belay that order", NOT "delay that order" as you have it.

Also, the G-suits that fighter pilots wear are more familiarly referred to as "speed jeans".

One final thing that I felt wasn't correct but I suppose was necessary for the story was that this is supposed to be set a hundred years (or more...?) in the future, yet the drone technology we have currently, far surpasses what your story claims...

 Anonymous7 months ago
ANOTHER

This was my favorite one so far. An entire race of adorable, lightweight little reversed gender roles aliens? 10/10

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