Bite of the Bimbo

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When Karen returned with the mirror, she held it so that Sarah could see her big ass. Sure enough, looking like a rash, the letters were faint but, definitely forming the word.

"What does that mean?" Sarah asked in that annoying high pitched voice.

"It means, welcome to the club, honey." Karen said, just as the doorbell rang. "Cock is here, I'll get it. She picked up Sarah's robe from the floor and grabbed a twenty from her purse. She just managed to wrap herself in the robe before opening the door.

The eighteen year old stepped inside and pulled the pizza from the warming jacket filling the air with the mouthwatering aroma of fresh pizza. Karen handed the teen the twenty and then open her robe revealing her nice tits, flat stomach and bald pussy to the youth. "If you want your tip, you'll have to collect it in the bedroom."

The thin freckle faced teen didn't have to be asked twice. He followed Karen into the bedroom which already smelled of sex. Sarah had enough of her mind intact to have changed the sheets, but wasn't able to keep her hands off her own body.

Karen dropped her robe and introduced the pizza delivery boy to her friend and helped him out of his clothes.

The eighteen year old was about to have what almost every man dreams of at one time or another in his life, having sex with two woman at once.

Sarah couldn't wait to suck the young cock. It wasn't big but it was a cock and she had to have it in every way she could.

Sarah woke up naked the next morning but her body had returned to normal. Karen wasn't anywhere to be found, but she left a note.

~~~

Dear Newest Member,

Sorry to have to rush off, but I have a class at ten. Below you'll find my number. I can help out on occasions with the girl part, but you are going to have to find a more than a few guys who love to fuck. You are going to find that your appetite is several times stronger than before.

If you are lucky we did enough last night that you may have satisfied the virus, this being your first outbreak. Normally, you would need two more guys. If not, you must get some clothes on and find some cock.

Remember, you must have a cock come in all three orifices, i.e. pussy, ass and mouth (and it can't be from the same guy). You must eat at least one pussy and have your pussy eaten. If you do all of these things every 72 hours or so you shouldn't have another outbreak. It does vary though so don't wait until the last few hours or you'll truly regret it, take my word for it.

Buy some bimbo clothes for home and some to stash in your car. You need to be prepared in case your count is off and you have another outbreak that is unless you like going around as a dumb naked horny bimbo.

I'm sorry that this happened to you. I wasn't trying to infect you and now you have to be careful not to infect anyone else. Don't bite or scratch any female unless you intend to condemn them to this life.

Call me if you need me.

Dr. Karen Murphy

858-555-555

PS: You'll find a positive side effect is that you will be full of energy and slightly stronger than before, which may come in handy with your police work.

~~~

"Police work! Damn," Sarah cursed. She was running late. She ran to the bathroom surprised by her speed and strength. Despite the sexual marathon, she felt pretty good. She thought her pussy would be sore, but it wasn't. She did have the taste of cum in her mouth and she decided brushing her teeth was first on her list of hygienic chores. As she was bushing, she looked at her image in the mirror thinking it had all just been a bad dream, until she saw something on her cute little ass. Turning she could easily read backwards the large red capital letters, "BIMBO".

"Shit!" She screamed as tooth paste flew from her mouth and landed on the tile floor at her feet. Holding the toothbrush in her mouth, she pulled on her narrow ass with both hands trying to see if the mirror was lying. Alas, she saw the bold lettering. Using one hand she tried to wipe it away, but of course it remained as if tattooed.

"There goes showering after my shift," she thought, while wondering if her bathing suit would cover it.

She began thinking of the officers she had flirted with and that she would definitely be getting to know Officer Anita Byrd a little better.

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blackknight314blackknight3149 months ago

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

bills47bills47over 7 years ago
very hot

dam I wish I was sara

DenkkarDenkkarover 9 years ago
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In my opinion this was a very well done porn story (i.e.: hot). I like how this particular bimbo curse not only features repeated transformations, but has some given and take to it: provided the curse's needs are met the extra energy/strength are a sweet deal. I also like how it takes place in San Diego since I just came back from vacationing there.

AbsolutelywickedthoughtsAbsolutelywickedthoughtsover 9 years agoAuthor
Great Comments!

To TamLin01:

Many of your comments are right on target. I do intend on taking this story out a few chapters to see where it is going. I am a little new at the contest thing and without tipping my hand, you have touched on may points I intend to pursue. But let me answer this one question, [You see, I bit you last night out of desperation. I needed to get cock.] Dr. Karen Murphy was fighting to get free and accidently bite Officer Sarah, because she was out of her mind. However, once she bite the woman, she realized what she had done and knowing that he had just condemned the woman to a life like hers she was remorseful.

Perhaps I didn't make that clear enough. I will try harder.

Thanks for your feedback and stay tuned. I think you will be pleased with the next chapter.

TamLin01TamLin01over 9 years ago

This is cheeky and funny and has some nice bubble-gum porn appeal, but while I'm very tempted to dub it a better-than-average offering, certain inexplicable things about it just bother me. Case in point:

[[Otherwise, you become an air head lisping bimbo until your bimbo body is sexually satisfied, and only then will you return to your normal appearance. Specifically, you must have cock in all three orifices and eat at least one pussy and have your pussy eaten roughly every 72 hours. Oh, and this is important, all the cocks have to come in all three orifices and it can't be the same cock, which means you are going to meet a lot of men. As for the pussy, you can accomplish that all with the same woman. If you are able to keep the virus in check then you will not physically change. If not then every night at dusk you will morph into a bimbo until the morning comes.]]

Good God, why all these contrived rules? What the hell sense does all that make? Particularly when we soon find out even these are not consistent and in any case the story ends before most of this comes into play anyway. We get it: Bimbo Virus, so she has to fuck a lot. That's the idea, right? So why not just say that? Why this elaborate schedule? Why are writers so enamored of meaningless rules that, in this case, never pay off anyway?

People are saying that the story is incomplete (actually they're saying it's a "good start," which is the polite reader version of "incomplete"), but actually, I think it's just fine in terms of length and comprehensiveness. It's just that it's crammed full of stuff we don't really need and that creates the impression that there should be more. For example, why tease this business with the partner if it's not going to come to anything? Why, for that matter, is that character around at all? He doesn't do anything. His potential to create action and conflict with the main character once she's changed is never explored. Drop that character and not only have you saved a lot of wasted words, you also no longer give the impression of a subplot that will never happen, and so the story seems less unfinished.

Other things puzzle me too:

[["You see, I bit you last night out of desperation. I needed to get cock.]]

...quoi? What the hell? She wants to fuck a man, so she...bites a woman on the hand? Am I the only one not connecting the dots on this? And biting someone snaps her out of her fit as well, I notice, which makes even less sense. Apparently this is how the condition spreads, so I guess it's something that people do not infrequently when they get to that point? I couldn't be more confused? I'm willing to cede a lot to a story that, again, hinges on a Bimbo Virus, but there still have to be some internal consistency.

These things bother me because, without them, this would be a superior story: Farcical and a little clever and generally just entertaining. That these things It's a frustrating when something is good, but could be great, but isn't because of mistakes that should easy to catch. So that hurts it in the end, even if I do still like it on the whole.

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