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Click hereShe hadn't expected this but she understood what he wanted. He was going to leave her there with him again. It was his way of punishing her, typical of him to hurt her so badly without laying a finger on her himself. She didn't protest because she knew it would do no good.
"I'm sorry Margaret, not for you, for me. You see whilst you were doing whatever you were doing with your lover and enjoying yourself at the expense of our marriage, I was cradling my Mother's head as she died in my arms"
The tears really burst forth then,"OH JOHN, I'M SO..." But her words were drowned by the rumble of the bikes engine as she saw the read tail light heading away.
The End.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoHah, funny comment from another anony 3 years back...
"If a man has to fight to keep his wife"...
He wasn't fighting to keep her, dumbass, he was punishing the slimeball. Destroying Gary Fucking Smith for being the prick that he was.
Over the top, sure, but he obviously snapped, mum just died and then faced with the sight of his childhood tormentor balls-deep in his wife's poopshoot. Combine that with being trained to be a fighting machine it was never gonna end well.
In my view, as the story stands at the end of the first part, I'm no great fan of hubby and wife, but I don't give a rat's arse that Gary got his.
In my view, you can't tell how people will react if you do them wrong, so don't do it. Be a human being, not an asshole. If someone comes back at you hard for what you did to them, too fucking bad. In the real world, people have died for less. That's just how it is.
Short version... Fuck around and find out.
...and if you don't like what I say, too bad. As Ricky Gervais says... I don't care.
On to part 2.
Anonymousover 1 year agoWhat was John's intent in leaving her out with the dead body? Just love the attention he gave Gary upon discovery. Since it was such a short scene, Gary's thoughts during that final confrontation would have been priceless to listen to. Would he have thought being punched in the face repeatedly was worth being in her mouth? Was feeling his ribcage being crushed an equal trade for sodomizing the guys wife that was killing him? Did he regain consciousness before drowning in his own blood and think, "it was all worth!" before drawing his last tortured breath? His thoughts during that last hour or so of life would have been good to share.
Fiddlesticks49over 1 year agoReally enjoyed the story up to the ending. Background set up the present day situation but the ending just doesn't seem to fit the story. Yes, she cheated and even though drugged went along with the situation before the drug could really take affect knowing her husband's hatred for Gary. Loss of his mother and then finding his beloved wife with his arch enemy could explain his actions but he had been so disciplined up to this point to suddenly go insane. Maybe closer to reality than I would like to admit. Would like to see one more chapter to see how Mags and John ended up. Still all in all a good story. A "4".
