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She noticed the driver looking at her curiously in the rearview mirror. "You okay, lady?" he asked.
"I'm fine," she snapped. "It's just been a long day." She turned and stared out the window. Like a tropical storm, Drew had uprooted her entire existence. Her life had spun completely out of control in less than a week, and she had no idea what she was going to do next. She winced again at the pain in her butt. "I'm fine," she whispered.
- COMMENTS
quietheronover 15 years agoIf you want this to be a novel, I'd draw out the suspense a bit more...for example, in the first chapter, he could just throw the magazine on her desk and not even touch her. Also, she could show more of her own fire, especially since she's such an ambitious executive. I find it ridiculous (even if she likes it) that she would consent to being spanked for being late...it just seems too trivial a reason to spank someone. Couldn't he spank her for a different reason? More sass at lunch? Better repartee? I would just want to see her power, see him draw her out in conversation, take pleasure from her bite, but then overpower her anyway. She's too defensive - he has it too easy with her. Finally, how many apartments in Seattle have incinerators? I grew up in Seattle. You could have a better sense of place...not just mention the buildings - what season is it? Is it dark when she drives home at 5:00 in the afternoon, or is it still light until 10:30 p.m.? Can she smell low tide from her office? Can she hear the ferries? Does she like to go running around the reservoir in Volunteer Park?
On a positive note, I think Drew is HOT.
duddle146over 17 years agoCould we call this story the bad-luck of the Drew. Jessica is terrified of their latest new employee Drew. Strangely she finds herself somehow resigned to his cruelty. Unsettling.
MINKXover 17 years agoYou have a skill for drawing up characters that set my mind buzzing. I'd love to meet someone like Your Drew character. But I think I'd be so alarmed by what they could mean, the irish wildkatt would just come out swinging, lol. Another wonderful read. Thank You for the pleasure.
justkatt
JRavenover 17 years agoDrew is a sniveling, cock sucking scum bag.
Congratulations on a well written piece.
Jenny
