"Sweet dreams," Ialia whispered.
"Nothing is as sweet as waking up next to you," he shot back.
"Hmm." She let out a small, pleased hum before she closed her eyes. When Azan fell asleep, his sleep was deep and dreamless, as if in his sated state, a dream was not the least bit necessary.
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Quick double chapter eh?
Its all about the pacing. Short vs long stories isn't a good or bad argument. Its a matter of pace. Your story is doing fine. Write whatever way pleases you and your readers will be pleased.
PS You don't have to choke yourself on my hand anymore. xDmore...
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