Blue Moon Rising Ch. 04

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Ian growled and his skin tingled where it was touching mine. Only a few people remained in the bar. They were all beautiful with perfect bone structure though quite pale. Ken and the bouncer too. How odd that I'd never noticed before.

The hulk was growing angrier as his abuse seemed only to humor the 'metro male'.

"Keep your fucking hands off my woman or I'll break your pretty little neck!"

"Now, now. She's far too sweet for you, and intelligent -- she prefers me."

The hulk lunged and was immediately pounced on by several bystanders.

Aiden's chair was knocked off balance landing him on his ass.

He finally stopped giggling. "Okay, that's enough. I'm not on call tonight but they always manage to find me to help clean up blood and gore and I'm not in the mood. Get the fuck out, take your skinny bitch with you."

Hulk and the skinny bitch looked scared shitless and couldn't get out fast enough.

"Wow Aiden, you rock!" Zoe shouted from behind Ian and the rest of the room turned towards her voice, their elongated, pointed teeth barely concealed.

Aiden started to giggle again, but it sounded far away, as though in a tunnel. I felt prickles all over my skin, the room began to spin and I was overcome by the need to sleep. Huh, vampires. That's so funny.

Ian was calling my name from miles away. I could no longer feel my body, no longer hear their calls. I fell into a grey consuming fog.

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willieonewillieoneover 13 years ago
Mmm!

I was loving this story until you had the Lizzy wanting to tear our couple apart that just turned me of your story which is a pity because apart from that it is awesome!

AyamiAyamiover 13 years ago
please write more

cant wait to read the rest please write it soon please

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
winter has set in :)

ive been reading tonight and really want the rest of this story.... please get to writing because my mind is in overdrive trying to come up with possibilities as to how things will end. Slightly disappointed that Ian would be unable to change her and stay together -how soppy of me - but other than that, loved it.

bopeep1bopeep1over 13 years agoAuthor
I will finish this story

I'll finish. I just have to wait for winter to set in.

Thank you all for reading and for the encouraging comments!

xo

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
This is a good story!

... it would be better if it was finished.

Don't keep us hanging.

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