"Twelve," he laughed. "Gotta be a twelve!"
Well, even in school, she always got the bonus marks.
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I hope you had fun with this one. I'm not sure if Sarah / Buffy / Seven has more to tell, but I'll leave that to you. Please let me know how you feel about it, and of course, cast your votes.
I look forward to reading your comments.
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Excellent start
Since you left open Paul's history and occupation, it would be wonderfully ironic if he turned out to be Bishop's superior or at least someone who can make Bishop's life hellish.
Definitely need more
I really enjoyed this story. Fun characters and sexy scenes. Please write more for them.
Dear Author, Yes, you need to add to this story of star crossed lovers. Like, what does he do for a living? Save on utilities and rent and move together into her or his apartment. Fall deeply in love and stay together. That all would be nice and acceptable. Anyway, thank you for another great love story and another five rating. Well deserved. jntiquesmore...
Great and healthy
It's nice to see a lusty story of healthy, nice people having a fine time and drawing closer together in the process. So much better than the sick cuckold, incestuous, obsessive and desperate stories elsewhere on this site.more...
Welllll...Good Gravy!
Once again, I love your storytelling. More than any other element,
your sense of humor is a perfect match with mine.
Your asides are Champion!
I do find myself wondering if my appreciation is because your stories
are what males most want to hear and believe?
I see few, if any, female comments among your responses?
Acknowledging that some Anonymous posts aren't quite clear.
I love all your stories I've read. I pause...and keep turning the pages!more...
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