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Melanie smiled and stepped forward. Cellphone guy looked captivated by her beauty. I could definitely relate.
She kissed him on the cheek and whispered, "Thank you," in his ear.
Then she hauled off and slapped the taste out of his mouth. And kicked him hard in the shins for good measure. "That's for what you did to my man!" she yelled at him with fire in her eyes.
Cellphone guy's mouth opened and shut, again and again, trying to find something to say to react to this sudden strike but never quite succeeding. Finally he gave up and limped away.
I had to stifle the urge to laugh for quite a while before I could speak. "Melanie, I have to confess two things about what you just happened."
"Oh yeah? And what would they be?"
"One, I'm going to have to try to never get on your bad side."
"I always knew you were a smart cookie, Matthew Robbins. That is a very wise decision."
"I thought you'd like that."
"I do. But what's the other thing you need to tell me?"
I put my arms around Melanie, both hands on the cheeks of her wonderful ass, and gently pressed her up against me so she could feel my hardness.
"I found that display incredibly sexy."
"Mmmm," she purred. "Why don't we go someplace more private so I can show you something REALLY sexy?"
It was the start of the best ending ever to the best summer ever.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoIt lacks a genuine flow... A story written with general diction.. The lack of detail makes it a boring read. I quit reading a page and a half into it. Has potential... Dialogue needs more realism/humor
Mostera1over 10 years agoExcellent erotica, and a wonderful romance. The plot was original, the characters written well, and you brought it all together seamlessly.
You wove Matt and Melanie as a couple so perfectly that we know exactly what will transpire. A very satisfying end.
Thank you,
M1*****
Privates1stClassover 10 years agoMatthew Robbins, being the very smart cookie that he is, has to stake a claim on that woman. Intelligent, beautiful, sexy, witty, and with a '67 Mustang, she sounds like a perfect match for Matt. I'd say this story needs a Chapter 2.
Good luck in the Summer Lovin' contest.
