Born Beautiful, Rachel's Story #02

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"What was that? I thought I heard a scream," said Rachel awakened from her sound sleep at an ungodly hour of the early morning. "What time is it?"

She didn't know. Even the rooster hadn't yet crowed. Sensing something was wrong, she lifted her head from her pillow to listen before sitting up in bed with anxious foreboding.

"Was I dreaming it or did I really hear a scream? Was that an animal or a human?"

She peered out her bedroom window looking for ghosts, goblins, and ghouls, but unable to see through the darkness and through the fog, there was nothing to see and nothing to hear but the whistling wind, the pouring rain, and those ever present, scary shadows that made her imagination run wild with fright.

To be continued...

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AeroielAeroielover 11 years ago
Please Continue Susan Jill Parker!!

Your stories are ALWAYS well written.

This one makes even a brazen old goat like me quite uncomfortable, but I have to say that some of the best authors I have read have made me very uncomfortable.

In my longish life I have come to the conclusion that all closed "societies" & "groups" that are dominated by males, whether religious (and I mean all religions), political, or a cult, many of the women and children are seriously abused in one form or another. Are there good men in this world that are not abusers and have no tolerence for it......sure....but looking at the entire world and its nations cultures, and societies as a whole, those good men are in a very small minority & back in the time frame Susan is talking about, it was far worse.

Geist26Geist26over 11 years ago
Patience

I can only echo the comments of Gemman before me. This chapter is clearly part of a larger story and context is important. On its own it may not be a quick thrill but I tend to find the writer rewards patience and background is often key to the things that come later. I'm sure that those of us who like Ms Parkers stories will look back at the story as a whole once it's complete and may have a different perspective by then. That said if you don't like it don't read it. I for one will continue reading.

gemman1gemman1over 11 years ago
I with you Susan

For all of those readers who have never read any of Susan's other works, then read those also. She is superb at telling an Erotic Story. The build up is in many way more important then the rest of the story. You can also tell she puts her heart and soul into her stories and I for one enjoy her story telling ability.

So If you don't like the story,... then move on to another author...nuff said...

SusanJillParkerSusanJillParkerover 11 years agoAuthor
PBS

PBS recently ran a show about the Amish, the women in particular who suffering incestuous abuse. I suggest you watch it.

Moreover, if you know anything at all about the Amish and about the Mennonites, they don't lie and they don't tell stories.

As a survivor of incest myself, it takes one to know one and I know this women was sexually abused. All the signs are there.

There's no reason for her to make up things. She doesn't know the stories that I write. You're the one in the dark. You're the one in denial. My story represents a small sampling by showcasing one family of what went on on a farm in Germany in 1860 and still happens to day in 2012.

For you to be sitting there reading Literotica, especially incest stories and suggest that incest is not alive in well makes me question your sanity.

Thanks for reading my stories and for taking the time to make a comment. Instead of shooting from the hip, perhaps you should research your information before you make anymore of a fool of yourself.

PTBzzzzPTBzzzzover 11 years ago
The facts you present are not the norm

in the community I live in. I was able to listen to a conversation about child molestation between the elders around here. Normally calm persons were ready to do serious damage to one member.

Perhaps she was telling you what she thought you wanted to hear, or her imagination was wild those/that day(s).

It could have happened as you say, but from my experience that person would not last long.

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