Born Into Darkness Ch. 10

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Kell butted in. "Zeus, Hera, Poseidon, Demeter, Apollo, Artemis, Athena... Hermes..."

"Let's not forget our favorites Eris and Thanatos. Moros was removed for not keeping his dick in his pants." Roxana added.

Dean growled. Sophie let go of his hand and turned slightly and started rubbing his chest in circles. That always calmed him down whenever he got riled up.

"I knew this wasn't over. I fucking knew it, but we have a problem; I can't go to any other realm. Remember I got stabbed and the fates kicked me out" He said as he pressed his face in her neck.

Sophie's body jerked. He never told her he got stabbed before. She wondered; since he went to war, how did he manage to keep his skin so perfect and smooth and not one scar? Maybe it's because of his healing abilities?

All of a sudden a vicious and bigger version of Munchy ran into the kitchen and growled; scaring the life out of her. For a second she left like the cat from Looney Tunes that got scared so bad he turned yellow and fainted; only she wasn't must of a fainter; unless knocked unconscious.

The three of them materialized all sorts of weapons. Dean his dual pistols, Kell had his sword and Roxana had her Katana in one hand and ninja stars in the other.

Roxana halted and dropped her stuff on the floor; causing a loud clanging making Sophie cringe at the loud noise and ran past Munchy. Everyone froze herself included.

Munchy morphed back to normal and pranced to Sophie's side, nuzzling her. She reached over for a pancake and fed it to him.

Roxana came back with a man. He was bruised and beaten, cuts marred his face and both eyes were swollen and purple, making Sophie wince; feeling real bad for him.

Sophie pulled out a stool and Roxana guided the man to sit down.

Roxana used her powers and handed her a large first aid kit then she went right to work.

Flashing a light in his eyes, he groaned in pain. Roxana painfully snatched the light from her hand. Roxana's eyes were purple, but as soon as the man placed a hand on her cheek she looked down at him and smiled.

Sophie knew that look right away. "He's your mate."

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Love the interplay between the characters

Even Kell and Roxana act like an old married couple - LOL. And poor Dean is at Sophie's mercy.

BTW, what happened to Munchy in the fight outside the diner? And he suddenly materializes when Dean snaps his fingers? Love the dog too - so much like his master - fierce when he needs to be, yet a playful puppy all other times.

Not to nitpick - but FYI. I'm a professional writer and I noticed a few typos - which jarred me since they're the incorrect words.

Pg 1 - typo, should be "pus" meaning white colored liquid signifying infection, whereas "puss" is shortened slang for a cat or in other cases, a mouth

Pg 2 - typo, should be "rogue" meaning scoundrel or unreliable person whereas "rouge" is a red cosmetic

Pg 2 - typo, wrote both "Roxana" and "Roxanna"

Pg 2 - typo, should be "quiet" meaning no noise, not "quite" which is a moderating adverb.

luv2read2

redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

do like those whining bitches at columbia law school and ask for a delay because you are so upset at the furgeson thing and garners death in nyc.

wingedangel324wingedangel324over 9 years agoAuthor
Fingers crossed

I plan to have at least ch.12 after xmas, it's finals week, sorry guys it's a little hard trying to write and balancing studying. But 12 and 13 will be up during the holidays for you to enjoy. As for right now i submitted ch.11 it's pending, i hope you guys love it i added extra for compensation for the long wait, sorry about that.

HappyPrickHappyPrickover 9 years ago
Looking for new chapters!

Looking forward to reading chapters 11, 12, &13

Over the Hollidays!

No pressure or anything like that!!!

LOL

avengilineavengilineover 9 years ago
2. you asked for my favorite? is that even possible?

I dont know! You made good characters so I like them all! Its all so cute!

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