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He leant down to whisper in her ear, "Payback." he said softly as he circled her nipple with the feather. She gasped and her eyes snapped open. He smiled as the feather stroked down her body to tease the hairs of her curly delta, she quivered slightly wishing that she hadn't given him the idea but was also thrilled by it.
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Foot note: the song mentioned in this chapter is by Beyonce and is called Halo.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 12 years agoIt may seem like there are a lot of charcters if you haven't read the stories in order at least once. I am re-reading the series for the third time and I have never been confused about who was who because the author does a great job of introducing them into the world and giving everyone a different personality. It is a very complex world but reading the stories in order makes it easier to follow and find favorite characters that you just can't wait to hear more about. I hope anyone who finds themselves lost because they are reading this story first goes to the authors bio page and reads the stories in the order given there.
Anonymousover 12 years agoToo many to keep track of, and I feel a few of them could be better introduced. It is confusing. I found my self just skimming through the pages, not really having the patience to figure all of them out.
RavenNightcloudalmost 14 years agoi keep saying it and its always true, your stories are amazing.
waiting for the next part with baited breath!
