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Click hereThe man's body was flung back as the heavy spear tore through his head, his sword clattering to the ground atop Sam's own. His arms finished sealing and he released his power as he turned to the direction the spear flew from. A blood flecked Theodore nodded to him from 20 yards away, then quickly turned to a new target, holding his lance under his left armpit.
"Holy shit..." Sam muttered as he reclaimed his sword.
He turned and scanned the area. 4 of the red guards remained, including Theodore, and about 10 of the green clad attackers, most unmounted. He didn't see any servants left standing. Sam closed his eyes slowly, and hardened his resolve. 'Help whoever needs it most.' He thought, and snapped his eyes open once again, feeling a new determination.
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And thus ends Chapter 2. I hope you've enjoyed reading it so far! Any constructive criticism is welcome. Compliments or suggestions are also greatly appreciated. If you have any questions, related to the story or not, I'm happy to answer.
~ DS
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vary good so far but whoa. sam just seems way too naive and trusting.
I plan on trying to have chapters coming out at least once per month, but it will probably vary. Chapter 3 will have a much smaller gap than between Ch. 1 and 2. Also, I post fairly frequent progress updates on my bio, so you can always check there if you are curious.
I am liking this story!
I love a story that has plot first and romance second. This plot is still in the early stages of unfolding and I am looking forward to seeing it to completion.
Do you anticipate chapters to take around the same time as the last one or was that fast/slow?
Have fun writing and keep us updated!