Boy Sorceress Pt. 02

PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

I nearly punched the screen in frustration. Why won't people just tell me what they mean?

Asker: thanjks for the hisdtory lesson. what do the symbolks on my flower mean?!

Mentor: The inscription on your flower reads: "The price paid for this power had been incomplete. The bearer shall pay the price of flesh for each use" (of it). I guess you do lose weight for every spell you work. This might prove to be a disadvantage.

Might prove to be a disadvantage?Might? Seriously, this guy and his fucking understatements...

Asker: i am dubbing you mentor understatement

Mentor: Glad to see you've retained a sense of humor in these trying circumstances.

Yeah, it wasn't easy. First this guy tells me the bad guys know me by name and that I have to abandon all that I know if I want to stay alive. Then he tells me my power is limited in ways theirs are not, cause it came at the expense...

I bent over to one side and hurled chunks as I realized my power came at the expense of Jen Malone's unborn baby.

I mean, murdering pregnant women? That's a whole new low. Not that it would have stopped them from doing it, but they probably hadn't even known she was pregnant when they killed her. I certainly hadn't. Jen had been plenty chubby on her own.

I forced myself to sit up on my stool when I realized the entire coffee house was staring at me. The patrons were pushing their cups away and squinting at their complimentary cookies with suspicion. The employees behind the counter jumped into action. One ran my way with a bucket and mop. The other disappeared into a back office. I wiped my mouth with my sleeve. It would soon be time for me to leave.

I sighed and processed all the new information. I had been so focused on the symbols, hoping they would lead me somewhere, and it turned out that I had already deduced their meaning. I sighed and tried to come up with a plan to fight the bad guys while I still had Mentor online to advise me on it.

A fresh text interrupted my frantic thoughts.

Mentor: I went to check on The Thirteen while you were drawing. I have some terrible news. They have your parents. I'm so sorry. They will try to get you to surrender in exchange for their lives, but it is a trap. A lie. They will murder your parents either way. They've seen their faces and The Thirteen deal with all complications in the same way. I'm so sorry, but you're powerless to save your parents.

I shook my head in silent denial. There was no fucking way I was going to run and hide while these rabid cunts murdered my parents. My folks might not have been the most warm, fuzzy and loving of people, but they were still blood. My blood boiled and I felt ready to kill each and every one of these thirteen fucks.

Mentor: I can only imagine how painful this news is for you, but I beg of you to not go to your house, or your parents' house. The Thirteen will see you and kill you. Are you in Springfield right now?

Asker: yes

Mentor: Five of The Thirteen have just flown to Springfield. They have seen where your cellphone was last active. They will be there in no time. You need to move!

Asker: i'm not in the same place now i still have questions

Mentor: Doesn't matter. One of the five is the werewolf. He will track you. You must go! Open a new e-mail and contact me as soon as you can.

Asker: the werewolf can fly?

Mentor: No, but one of the mages can make them all fly. I've lost sight of them. They will land on the outskirts of Springfield at any minute. Then Horton will open and start a car for them to drive to your last known location. The werewolf will track you by scent from there. You must move and cover your scent as you go!

Fuck, flying was way too expensive for me, energy-wise. I'd need to run. The employee was mopping up my vomit. I groaned out a feeble, "Sorry," at him as I leaned to cover the screen with my body. He grunted in response and didn't even look up. I typed out another question.

Asker: why don't they just teleport here?

Mentor: Teleportation is possible, but extremely difficult. The mage must know the place they are going in every detail and be able to recall it perfectly. If anything changes in the place they're teleporting into since they've last seen it, they cannot teleport there. Even the tiniest change prevents it. Hurry! They could be in Springfield already.

Asker: ok, i'm going, bye!

Mentor: don't try to teleport the flesh price would kill you!

Asker: i wasn't going to

Mentor: Good. Erase this conversation and go, they could find your scent at any moment. Make a new email and contact me as soon as possible!

I logged out of the chatroom, erased the browser history and closed it just as the assistant manager, a bearded bear of a man in his thirties, came over to me. "Ma'am, are you alright?"

"Yeah," I said and jumped out of my stool. I ran out of there, unheeding of the strange looks cast my way. I barely felt the cold night air as I ran blindly down the street.

The Thirteen were tracking me and my parents were held hostage. I was cut off from my old life and my only ally was a chatroom-haunting ghost. The only thing I really had going for me was my power and that had been gained at the expense of Jen's unborn child. I hadn't killed it, but I felt guilty over it, all the same. It was hard to keep it together under such circumstances.

I needed to come up with a plan, but I was too emotional to do it. Fear, loneliness, panic, hopelessness, guilt. They all worked together to drown out my intellect. My eyes teared up and my vision went blurry, no matter how hard I blinked.

I wept and bawled openly as I ran for my life. The Mentor's words to cover my scent rang hollow in my head. How was I supposed to do that? I ran faster, though I knew that the distance didn't matter so long as there was a werewolf coming after me. I just couldn't think of anything else.

1...456789
Please rate this story
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
15 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This is amazing

This doesn't deserve to be hidden on a site like this. Erotic Urban fantasy isn't impossible to find, but add to that a well designed magic system and a refreshing story 😍😍😍😍. Thank you!

AurimazAurimazalmost 7 years ago
Reading about

crappy MC's sucks, but your story is good. I'll stay with it to the end.

JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorabout 7 years ago
Frustrating, yet understandable.

For those who criticize how "dumb" the hero/ine is, stop trying to compare him to a super hero and actually READ his thoughts, fears, emotional trauma... this is not just a game to this guy - it's a shitload of terrible crap all packed into a scant few hours (if you dismiss sleep time). Just the survivors guilt alone would cripple most people for at least a day or two. With this fellow's already bad self-esteem and "fatalism complex" (Fist of the universe anyone? lol) it's no wonder he's stumbling as much as he is...

blah blah blah, haters gonna hate

I think you've made a really good character here, full of flaws, doubts, mistakes and self-recriminations (both valid and not) but a basically well intentioned and noble "hero" despite his human failings and fears.

The stakes went up even as the limitations described by "Mentor" put some of his fears to rest even as the knowledge of his old life being effectively barred to him is competing with the knowledge that a super-powerful group of terrible people are going to kill his family :(

Good stuff, hoping it just keeps getting better :)

M

jlmnjlmnover 7 years ago
Very split on this story

On the one hand, I'm quite taken with the plot of the story. On the other hand, the protagonist is bordering on too dumb to live. I can only take that so many times before I start rooting for evil to win.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Fascinating

I've read published books written not nearly as well as this. I bet you could get this edited and self publish this as an e-book and make some $$.

Show More
Share this Story

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Similar Stories

Font of Fertility Ch. 01 Jeremiah finds out about his magic dick.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Champions A US soldier is chosen to defend another realm.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Stolen A man is transformed and taken to a new world.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Malcubus Ch. 01: Cherry Summoning a succubus is not for beginners.in NonHuman
The Missing Dragon An elusive fire breathing monster leads him to a new world.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
More Stories