"How was it?"
"It tastes really, really good."
"I look forward to sampling it for myself," I said. She didn't have a quick response to that, and I quickly jumped in before she could come up with something.
"Good night, baby," I said.
"Talk to you soon."
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If you enjoyed this, and you want to read more, please drop a line and tell me so. This isn't just a very unsubtle attempt at compliment-fishing either - I'm actually looking for some help on how to proceed. I know how the rest of the story goes - I just don't know the best way to tell it. So, if you'd like to help, message me. Otherwise, enjoy!
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Wanting....
I want more! Hell of a telephone conversation....had me going from the start...and cumming by the end! Keep writing!
OK now, I just want to point out...
How amazing that was...
At this point I'd say that was so good I'd be happy with it as is...
But the thought that there are additional chapters waiting for me to read them...? Well just, Damn, why am I wasting my time writing a comment when I COULD be reading on...?more...
Great Story!!
Keep Brad on the road for a while with those wonderful, sexy phone calls. Then he gets to meet his goddess!! Can't wait to read more!
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