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That moment seemed to stretch on forever.
"Well, was it....was it true?" she pressed.
After a while I just swallowed hard and then gave the only answer that I could.
"All of it........every word."
She just smiled.
I felt a single, lone tear roll down my cheek then.....and....as our eyes met I saw an almost identical one roll down hers.
An indefinable moment of symmetry passing between us......almost as if the two of us had somehow gotten into sync without even knowing.
"Let me give you two a moment." Tracy said softly. She squeezed my arm tight then and flashed me a warm, knowing look, before disappearing into the bedroom.
We were alone now and there were no words.
The only thing either of us could do then was just smile.
Jen finally broke the silence.
"It's okay....really....things are gonna be okay now, I can feel it."
"Yeah....I feel it too." I replied.
Again there was a long pause. I didn't know what to say next or even how to act.
Once again, it was Jen who broke that deadlock.
Her words surprised me at the time, but now that I think back on it, I really shouldn't have been surprised at all.
"Maybe we had better tell Tracy that I'm not going anywhere."
"Well......In that case it's going to be a long night." I replied, my mind filling with an old but familiar emotion.
"Oh....I hope so.......I really do."
THE END.
- COMMENTS
Dimachaerusalmost 3 years agoAuthorInteresting. I don't take offence at the previous comment. Is an old story and my first one. Too much to unpack with this one. Too much of it autobiographical. I remember being very concerned a the time with getting intense memories down before they faded. Artistry was forgone. My later works were written perhaps far better but I'm not going to be too harsh on myself for that. Putting it down on in text form was therapy for me at the time. I central male figure was very much me back then. many of the situations real. That's not a good thing.
RanDog025almost 4 years agoI couldn't get past those two pages of just rambling on and on and on! Also I had to edit it for over 10 minutes to be able to load it into a reader so I didn't have to deal with the dot dot dot dot dot dot's! Isn't it easier to use a comma? A literary nightmare!
Jhbrown27over 4 years agoKind of unusual for me to like this kind of story but it was well done. Very good writing.
wanderinggipsyalmost 7 years agoHanging around through the insufferably long build ups to every thing,to get a fitting end,not one ounce worth it!!
the writer should know that the readers are not having any obsession over Jen and need the main parts of the story to be less wishy washy!! having a beautiful,spirited girl break can be written so enjoyably!!
but this was like too little coffee in too much water!! ;))
Anonymousover 7 years agoI didn't even get to the part where he fucked Jen. I skipped to the end so I could give it 1 star. This writer uses 10 words when 5 will do. The difference between 1 and 5 stars is 41/2 pages
