- BDSM
- Brenda's New Career
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"There won't be any training for the next few days, not until you're at the point where you can move around with that leg. I meant what I said yesterday about giving you a chance to be a cart pony, but we won't start on that for a while. If you're able to eat, I'll have your food sent in."
Raven stood shakily on one knee and her hands inside the hoof-gloves. She whickered softly and shook her head up and down. She was answering two questions, one of them she had asked herself. Yes, she was hungry and yes, she was reconciled to being a ponygirl for her master.
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Thank you for reading this story. I hope you had a lot more fun than Raven did, but things will get better for her too. I like writing stories on Literotica, but I like it a lot more when I know that people are reading and enjoying them, and I appreciate it when readers take the time to express their opinions by voting. Like most authors on Literotica, I practically live for feedback from readers, either public comments or email to me. Such feedback, whether praise or criticism, helps me to write more and better stories, and I respond to it whenever I can.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 11 years agoI liked everything in but would want to read much more about how Brenda felt as the weight of her rider rested on her back as they sat down on her and how it felt to be squeezed between her riders legs and how hard it was to endure her masters ass bouncing on her back, as he rode her.
There should also be much more with the cruel riders who are far more merciless when they ride her.
They do not need to be so cruel that they just whip her when she cannot go faster and just falls over but if they were harsh enough to get the maximum speed from her and not caring how much they mark her or how tired she is, would make for a more interesting read.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI really am enjoying your stories and obviously the previous commentor hasno experience with the dynamics of D/s. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Anonymousover 11 years agoThe idea is intrigueing, but it lingers on too long. I can not imagine a girl or woman would submise to this and turned into a someone who would try to please her captor, waring a bit, hoofs and even being branded. But oke, it is a fantasy story and funny to read.
Makybe_Divaabout 14 years ago... on the evolution of Brenda into Raven the ponygirl. I also liked that McGillicudy was not a cardboard cutout, but someone who had real feelings for his ponygirls, especially Raven. Someday it would be nice to see how her training to carting and her final adjustment to being a ponygirl turns out.
Anonymousover 14 years agoThe long wait was well worth it!!! Let's hope we read more about Brenda's new career... Thanks
