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maxinorex, Sinfuladdiction and 26 other people favorited this story!
Should Be In The Adults Comics Section Of Lit…..
Factual Error: I’m NO Egyptian expert or anything but you DON’T usually use the word ‘Dynasty’ to describe all of the eras or each kings rule.
And because of that it doesn’t feel authentic enough and thus sadly.
I could forgive it for being in the wrong section but I can’t for five it is the Factual Error. And don't even get me started on the drawings, I mean it's ok for what it is but what I can't forgive about it is, lack of meat in each frame I feel as thou they are the only two on this 'expiation' WHERE IS THE GODDMAN FUCKING GUIDE OR THE EGYPTION EXPERT OR THE NATIVE??!!!! DON'T YOU NEED A SHIT LOAD OF PEPOLE TO BE ON A EXBTITION????? AND NOT JUST THE TWO!!!!!! LET ME ASK YOU SOMETHING, DID YOU WATCHED ANY OF THE MUMMY MOVIES BEFORE YOU CONCIVED THIS 'IDEA'?????!!!!!q
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I have really enjoyed your work. Hope it becomes a money maker for you.
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