Broken Vows Ch. 4

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SteamyChik
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“Oh, Sister Purity, I’m sorry!” Mary cried.

“Are you hesitant about your new responsibilities already, Mary? I’m disappointed in you. But you will find that even in the Order there are punishments for hesitation or unwillingness to perform your duties.” Sister Purity raised her hand for another resounding spank on Mary’s quivering bottom.

SMACK!

“Now, do you think you can perform the tasks set you by the Order? Remember that you have already agreed to become one of us.”

Crying now more from the humiliation than the pain, Mary begged, “Please Sister Purity, I’ll do what you ask.”

Sister Purity rubbed her hand across Mary’s now warm, red bottom. She ran a finger between her labia lips. “Mmm, Mary, so wet, did you like that little spanking? Get up now and let’s see how you do. I will teach you just what to do.”

Tearfully, Mary sat up and watched Sister Purity sit down and spread her legs. She gasped when she saw that Sister Purity had no hair at all between her legs, and looked up at her questioning.

“None of the chosen nuns of the Order have hair sweet Mary. We shave and keep ourselves clean, pure and smooth at all times. It increases the pleasure of the Fathers and you will enjoy it also. Now, I know this is your first time. Just kiss me there and then lick my clitoris dear.”

Mary bent over and smelled the musk of Sister Purity’s arousal. She planted the softest of kisses on Sister Purity’s hairless mons.

Sister Purity moaned and arched upwards. “Please, Mary, lick me.”

This time, Mary licked. She was surprised that the taste was not bad at all, slightly musky and tangy. She lost herself in discovering the texture and contours of her mentor’s folds. Her tongue slid alongside Sister’s clitoris and then up and over it, eliciting hissing moans from Sister Purity. Startled, Mary said, “Did I hurt you?”

Moaning and laughing, Sister Purity said huskily, “No, you’re fine please more!”

Mary began to finger the outside of Sister Purity’s vagina while she licked her clitoris. The excitement of having little Mary for the first time and now having Mary licking her increased her arousal.

“Yes, Mary, push your fingers inside me now, and suck me baby, suck my clit!” Sister Purity cried out, her fingers pinching and pulling at her nipples.

Mary sucked on Sister Purity’s clitoris and felt the swollen hardened nub against her tongue. She sucked it and swiped her tongue across the bud and then pushed three fingers into Sister Purity’s wet vagina.

Sister Purity moaned her body bucking as an orgasm rushed over her nerve endings in a tidal wave of pleasure. The young girl licking her, using her fingers for the first time, learning to give her such wonderful pleasure caused her to orgasm quickly. She pulled Mary up to her and kissed her tasting her own juices on her fresh mouth.

“Did I do ok, Sister?” Mary asked.

“Mmm, you did just fine, Mary,” Sister Purity beamed at Mary.

“It’s very different isn’t it, than with the Father,” Mary said innocently.

“Oh yes, very different, but remember, the Fathers always come first,” Sister Purity said. “Now we must get you ready to face your first full day as a sister in the Order. You will not get your new name for six weeks. But you will begin to wear the white habit. For now, and if the Father’s choose, you will keep your beautiful head of hair, but you will need to shave your pubic area completely.” Sister Purity said all of this while standing up and going to her armoire and pulling out Mary’s new clothing. “As a member of the Order, you are never again permitted to wear anything but your habit, veil and sandals. Father Kirk will give you your cross. Take your shoes and socks off now and run into the bathroom and take a quick shower. I will get all of this ready for you.”

Mary bent to take off her shoes and socks. “Sister Purity? Is this, I mean what we just did, and what happened to me last night, is it…” Mary said and let the question trail off.

“Mary, like you, I wanted to commit myself to serve the Lord and help people. Like you, I went through confusion and denial when I was initiated in the special Order. But, I do believe that what we do is for the best. We make it possible for the Father’s to concentrate on their work, to hear the confessions of men and women alike without letting their own unfulfilled desires cause them discomfort and distraction. What we do is necessary and important. I believe that, I really do,” Sister Purity said with conviction. “I think you know in your heart, this is right for you too. I don’t think you could have been happy in the Order in another role, do you?”

Mary looked down at her feet and said, “No, I don’t think I could have been.”

“Quick now, go take a shower, you will be fine,” Sister Purity said. She watched Mary run off to the bathroom to take a shower, her young, strong body sweet to watch. As soon as the door closed to the bathroom, Sister Purity looked at the privacy screen.

Father Kirk came out from behind the screen and smiled at Sister Purity. “Very nicely done, Sister. She belongs to us now. The Order is stronger by one more today. Come here,” Father Kirk ordered.

Father Kirk held Sister Purity in a tight embraced his hands running all over her naked body. “Mmm, you feel good after a good fuck, Sister. But I have to go take care of business now. Send our new sister to Father Flanigan tonight. He will be instructing Father Jameson in the delights of his new Order. You come see me,” Father Kirk murmured in her ear.

Concerned for Mary, Sister Purity said, “So soon after last night though? Are you sure?”

“Are you questioning me, Sister?” Father Kirk asked with an edge of hardness in his voice.

Looking down, Sister Purity said, “No, of course not.”

“Fine, then get yourself dressed and get Mary dressed and about her duties. Both of you should take naps this afternoon.” With that, Father Kirk walked out of the room, shutting the door quietly behind him.

Fresh and slightly damp still, Mary came out of the bathroom and saw that Sister Purity was dressed. She went over to her and took the new white habit with trembling fingers. “I’m so happy, Sister Purity,” Mary said.

“I know child, I know. Now put those on and let’s get started with the day. We will be taking naps this afternoon and tonight will be here soon enough,” Sister Purity said, helping Mary get into her new religious clothing.

“What’s happening tonight, Sister Purity?” Mary asked.

“Just get dressed and enjoy the beginning of your new life, Mary. Tonight will be here soon enough,” Sister Purity said and sighed. She gave Mary a sweet kiss on the cheek and then headed for the door.

Mary looked around the room and walked after Sister Purity. She now had on the white veil and habit of the Order. She walked self-consciously. She felt the material of the habit on her bare skin, rubbing her achy nipples and swishing against her still red bottom. Her sandals made the smallest little click as she walked. She looked down the hall and saw Father Kirk watching her. She felt an instant tingle between her thighs and blushed.

Father Kirk smiled at little Mary.

To Be Continued...

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Story is absolutely fantastic! I wish I had studied for the priesthood.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A- because of "Too much too young".

Nobody accepts change that fast, no matter there IQ. Ergo: this fantasy is damn hot, but it'd be more believable if there was a lot more reluctance... that or you could firmly pre-bed Sister Purity in Mary's fantasy realm as an object of affection/love/desire. Mary must, being orphaned at 8, have felt an ongoing need for the acceptance, approval, affection, and love of an older women... maybe not exactly a mother-figure, but an "experienced friend" and confidant at least.

This chapter is immaculately well authored, as per your norm; I just find it impossible to really believe that a puritanically raised near-virgin would accept any expression of her latent bi-sexuality so easily... my expectation is that such an experience would have posed some deep challenges to Mary's self-image, which would most-probably have negatively impacted her self-worth (I.e. it smells like rape, to me)... possibly only after the fact, but none-the-less extremely traumatic; especially coming as it does the very morning after loosing her virginity, to a priest no less.

To keep this chapter as is, I would suggest a preceding "flash back chapter" where Purity helped Mary through the loss of her parents... one laced with controlled simmering sexual tension on Purity's side, never openly expressed, but heart-felt. Kids are smart. They pick up on subliminal sexual signals, which they do remember, even if they don't understand them at the time.

Love, respect, and tenderness moves mountains in all of us.

IMHO, this chapter is not up to your usual (truly excellent) standard. Just my opinion, take it or leave it. Having said that, I find myself eager to read the rest of this series; and everything else you've published.

So, an "A" or maybe an "A-" from me, for one. "Great", but not quite "masterful".

BADSAM689BADSAM689about 16 years ago
Great Story!

Stories 1,2 and 4 are all great. (I didn't read numbers 3 or 5.) I hope you write some more. Tell us what happens to Mary while she's in the convent.

relo22relo22about 17 years ago
Left Cold

Installments one and two left me quite hot and wanting more. Especially when Mary's cherry was popped by Father Kirk. I was pleased to discover that Father Kirk and Sister Purity are REALLY brother and sister. I was hoping for some hot brother/sister sex. Since I'm not into girl/girl sex, or boy/boy sex for that matter, this installment left me cold. But I am interested in finding out what happens tonight.

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