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She has clearly thought this through to meticulous detail. Brooke's face changes from deadly serious to a smile. "I want to know that you understand this." She says to me.
I clearly had not idea what I was getting myself into. I thought this would just be tryst, or that maybe we would click and I would leave Jess for her. But now I see that I have exposed myself to a predator. She has her hooks in me. I couldn't back out now even if I wanted to. And i can't even fathom wanting to, she is just too intoxicating. She's like that cult of personality leader that inspires millions to follow his lunacy. But I am the sole focus of her efforts, and I'm helpless to do anything about it.
"I understand completely now Brooke." I tell her with certainty. "I didn't quite realize what you were, that you get anything and everything you want. You can count on me to work with you to get whatever you want, with no questions asked."
That evil smile again crosses her face again. "Good." She says as she leans in and kisses me on the forehead. "Tomorrow we'll get to work claiming what's mine. And you'll help me with every bit of it. Oh, and another thing, in case you couldn't tell, I get off on making people suffer. You're going to need to be strong and ruthless as you help me take everything that your wife desires."
"Anything and everything for you Brooke." I say in resignation.
"Goodnight my faithful pet." Brooke says to me.
"Goodnight my goddess." I say back to her as I close my eyes and fade into unconsciousness accepting my new fate.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoGood work. Looking forward to the implications of that Spade tattoo...
Anonymousover 6 years agoGood stuff. I'm a fan of the female sexual predator seducing the husband. Protagonist did seem to fall a bit too fast for my tastes and seems a little hard to relate to - there was no resistance on his part. Looking forward to the next chapter and how she warps him even more.
vinylzogover 6 years agoAuthorThansk for the feedback Russ. I generally ignore the troll comments. I am definitely looking for feedback on my writing style and how I can make it better. I recognize that i could make it more easy to read, more engaging, and that I could probably make it feel more realistic. The goal is to make it read, like it feels in my head when i'm coming up with the ideas. I'll keep working on improvement. If part 4 is better than part 1, then i'm making progress. J
Anonymousover 6 years agoThis is a weird mix of elements, I like that it grows from a longterm phone sex connection, one of my friends used her phone sex clients to become a professional domiatrix, weirdly intimate relationship can develop between strangers. The element of placing all the blame for the cruelty of betraying the wife on Brooke is probably similar to the logic that allows people to be comfortable as adulterers. The sex is not so well written nor the writing so good as to explain the impact both positive , for me, and so vocally negative for other posters. Something very good here that deserves encouragement, keep writing this story, but expect to have to totally rewrite it later. Russ.
