He moved his hand to her nipple, and rolled it gently between his thumb and forefinger. When she moaned again, he bent to kiss her. He hoped that his tongue probing her mouth created the distraction he needed, and he slipped his right hand back to his cock. His fingers pinched lightly at her nipple, causing her to suck in a deep breath, and JD took his opportunity.
As he squeezed her nipple again, he bit her lower lip gently, lined the head of his cock against her wet hole, and plunged inside of her, meeting with resistance that reminded him that she was a virgin. A shudder raced through his body at the thought of taking Brooke's virginity after all this time.
Brooke's hips tried to move away from the intruder as she cried out in pain, but JD held on tight and thrust into her again even harder. This time he felt her warm wetness even farther down his cock, and he knew he was close to breaching the barrier that was keeping him from entering her all the way.
"Oh, JD. It hurts. Go easy," Brooke said in a shaky voice. Her eyes opened and tears spilled down her cheeks.
"Do you want me to stop?" JD said, hoping silently that she would say no. He wasn't sure he could stop if he tried.
"No. Just do it. Fast," she said, panting a little.
"OK. Take a deep breath."
As she inhaled, he thrust his hips as hard as he dared. This time he felt the resistance on the head of his cock give way, and his pelvis slammed between her legs. Brooke cried incoherently as the pain shot through her body, but when JD started to pull out, she put her hands around her waist to stop him.
"No," she said. "Just give me a minute to adjust."
JD groaned and kissed her lips. "Good girl, Brooke. You are so warm. And so tight."
"Holy cow," she said. "I can't believe this is happening."
"Are you happy?" he said.
"Yes. Really happy," she said. Fresh tears started to flow, and she said, "I'm not a virgin anymore, am I?"
"No, you're not, sweetheart. Are you ready? It's not gonna take me long."
Brooke nodded, and JD pulled out almost all the way. He pushed his cock inside, slowly and gently, moaning all the time.
"Your pussy is so tight," he whispered, reversing direction again.
"You can go a little faster, I think," Brooke said.
JD increased the pace, but kept his movements smooth and gentle. He could see the pain reflected in her face, but he knew that he would keep going until he came. "I'm almost there," he said. "Are you OK?"
"Yes. Keep going."
"Oh my god. I'm gonna come. Oh god, Brooke. I'm coming."
He slammed all the way into her, much harder than he meant to, and cried out, much louder than he meant to. Brooke wrapped her arms around him and held him tightly to her. She was crying from pain and joy and love all at the same time, and when he pulled out of her and collapsed on top of her, she smiled through her tears.
JD kissed her one more time, slipped the condom off into a tissue, and fell asleep on her pillow.
Brooke went into the bathroom to clean up, and she examined her face in the mirror, trying to see if she looked any different now that she wasn't a virgin anymore.
"Nope. Just the same, mousy me," she said to her reflection. She didn't know what she expected, but somehow she thought she'd look older or wiser or something.
After her shower, she slipped on her terrycloth robe and went to her room to ask JD if he wanted her to heat up some lasagna for him. Once again, his sleeping form made her heart melt, and she decided not to wake him.
She climbed up onto the bed and slipped under the covers, trying not to disturb JD. He looked so peaceful and so relaxed, lying on his side with his arm over the heart-shaped pillow she'd kept on her bed since childhood. Before she turned off the bedside lamp, so took a moment to look over his body. His cock had softened, and no longer looked like the battering ram that had broken her hymen. She leaned over him and pulled the purple afghan over his naked body. She kissed him on the temple and on the cheek as she tucked him in.
"I love you, JD," she whispered as she turned off the lamp. With her back to him, she didn't see the smile cross his face.
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Wow this was great and would have made the story "By Demon's driven so completely different. Excellent writing I think perhaps she could have tamed that bad boy a bit.
I think I would like the polar opposite characters of Brooke and Molly to meet in a sequel to that story and watch JD squirm or at least wipe that confident self-satisfied smirk from his face. Unless of course his innate charm talked them into a menage e' toi, :Dmore...
Slice of warm apple pie with whipped cream on top
A story fragment both sweet and sizzling, a realistic look into a girl's first time. Mr. Experience leads Miss Innocence into the heat of sexual adventure - he does such a good job she can't wait to trade in her virginity. The characters are very nicely conveyed - I have not met either one before, but I can imagine spending more time with both of them. It is a slice of their interactions, a peek - the drama here is the act itself, nothing else. There's more to learn, more to explore. The last sentence was very nicely done - leaving us with both satisfaction and a bit of mystery (what's behind that smile?).
Regarding the writing, you weave back and forth between their two points of view. It doesn't work too badly, but was confusing now and then.more...
I feel faint
That's a stroke story! Oh, my goodness...speechless.
Yeah, like that is ever going to happen. Well, knowing where this story came from, the fact it's only two pages is a miracle. But it's a very good miracle in that it took the very essence of the situation and let it play out into a very sweet story. The very brevity made it even more realistic. Bravo.
Critique: (you know me, lol) Well, there is a style of storytelling that is "In medias res" or in the middle. You begin the tale at a fixed point no past given no future mentioned.It's simply a moment in the lives of the characters. From everything I've read, when doing a story like that, try to start with action. If not action then a hard story-hook or single line to catch your reader.
This started a little too slow. Beyond that, great story.
MSTmore...
Not bad
However authors need to learn where the hymen is located, if he has three fingers inside her he already broke the hymen.
nice story
Good writting - was very nice - has happened many times - a shy smart girl giving into her "bad" boyfriend - but - needed more on why he was bad - also more on her - description - how far she had gone before - I assume.. a 5'4" 34b/a book type - but could be a music type that sort of thing. Enjoyed it though...more...
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