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"Shhhhhhhhh, baby, I gotta take care of this."
He rolled over and grabbed some tissues from the box on the nightstand. I could hear the wet, squishy sounds as he removed the condom from his cock. The bed shook gently as he wiped himself off and then made a perfect shot with the tissues into the wastebasket.
"You scored," I said as I heard the thump of the paper hitting the bottom of the metal receptacle.
"I certainly did," he replied as he rolled back over and put one arm protectively around me. "Thank you, Debra. You are magnificent."
Seconds later I could tell by the even rhythm to his breathing that he'd fallen asleep. I'll admit to being a little disappointed. There was so much more that I wanted to do to Bryan. However, I did have a vague recollection of the recuperative powers of the young, and had no doubt that he'd be in shape for another go around after a short nap.
A cool breeze began to blow in from the gulf. I thought about closing the window but enjoyed the fresh air far too much. Instead, I pulled a light blanket from the back of the bedroom chair and carefully draped it over us before rolling to my side to join Bryan for a restorative nap.
The End.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoWithin the first few paragraphs the protagonist accidently kills her husband. This is why I dont read alleged "erotica" written by women. Its always some melodramatic, emotionnally driven, and quite frankly CONFUSED drivel which is better suited for the Hallmark channel or any other female viewed varietal.
I read erotica to be turned on by both the personas of the characters, and the seduction/lust contained therein. Only a woman would start a fantasy/erotic story by murdering her husband. Thats not sexy. Just like Titanic - it ends with thousands of male corpses floating in the ocean; and women think this is 'romantic'? Its tripe, and not alluring or sexy.
You could have made the husband some philandering asshole, and the female lusted after someone else; Id balk. But starting the story with his murder is only in the realm of lustful fantasy IF your a delusional/twisted fu$k. Not...Exactly...A turn on.
Another give away that this is penned by a female, are the unnecessary, unnatractive details and nagging complaints:
"Went to the gym because Im FAT"
"Took a pill because Im SICK with allergies"
"Hubby left phone somewhere; it drives me MAD and now might cost me my life".
Women are $hit when it comes to the art of seduction; and lazy.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoA good gripping story that wouldn't let me stopp till the end was reached. Very well done
Anonymousabout 17 years agovery enjoyable read obviously written by a lady who both likes to recive and wrire about two adults enjoying sex
Anonymousover 18 years agoNice development but the original contact was a bit hard to believe.
