By The Sea, Gently

byAdrian Leverkuhn©

His first solo, my first ever promise to him -- kept.

I'm watching his little wings as he taxis back to the ramp, to me, and -- I hear it then.

A voice so familiar to me now, then laughter.

I know that voice, I tell myself. And that's Liz laughing, here on the wind all around me.

And then I feel her behind me again, close now, closer than forever, and I feel her hands on my shoulders, then her arms as she comes closer still, as then she's all around me -- again -- the way it should be.

"You forgive me?"

It's a whisper, really, just something passing on the wind. Then I feel something pinch me on the ass as a whirling gust crosses the ramp, and another gale of laughter comes for me...

...as Ben turns and brakes to a stop. He sets the parking brake and retracts the flaps, then opens his door and runs into my arms. I feel her there with us under the sun, and while I'm not sure whose tears I feel on my face, now I understand a father's pride -- and her's, too.

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(C)2016 Adrian Leverkühn | abw | this is a work of fiction, of course, though a few names and places have been changed to protect the guilty.

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by Dont_miss_me02/06/17

Damn onion cutting ninjas...

Thanks for a great story and a change of pace on here.

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by Ambivalence11/18/16

I always kind of hate tragedy stories...

But only because I hate tragedies...

This seemed to be an excellent story, notwithstanding...

Five stars.

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by Anonymous10/29/16

A work of art, and love. Thank You.

The only slip was when he asked her if she ever really loved him. From everything else you described about these people, and their relationship, that was a really stupid question. You're forgiven.

Thanksmore...

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by Anonymous10/10/16

A memorable love story! Gave it a 5 on the first read and would give another if I
could! Thank you for the handling of death of a loved one so well. Again, it was and is a pleasure to read your stories.more...

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by Anonymous10/05/16

Not the best you've done

Not the worst, but not the best.

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