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Sighing, making a snap decision, Cadence reached out and snatched the vibrator off its makeshift pedestal. It was a tough grab - she had to press her shoulder completely against the bars, and she almost knocked it out of her own reach. She succeeded, however, and pulled her prize into her cage.
She turned it on and guided it automatically to her still-wet folds, sighing with relief as pleasure flooded through her. She closed her eyes, leaning back into her pillow, dragging the buzzing rod up and down her clit, shivering with satisfaction.
In her mind, she found herself playing back highlights from the evening, despite herself. The way David had her in his control from the moment he saw her - provoking her into fleeing, waiting for her to drop her guard to pounce. The inevitable, controlled way he implemented his plan, coerced her into obeying him, and humiliated her for the way her body responded to him.
The feel of his hot hands on her body, slow and soft, igniting her nerves and casting a fire along her flesh wherever he touched. She turned her vibrator up a notch, moaning a little. The hard, brutal sting of his paddle against her ass, making her wetter with every strike, even as she screamed for him to stop. His hard cock, constantly pressing against her, seeking her wetness relentlessly. The way he'd played her body so expertly, slowing coaxing her to the very edge of an orgasm, then snatching it away from her at the last moment. She rubbed herself faster, bucking her hips against her dildo, moaning more loudly.
"Oh, David," she whispered, "oh David, please..."
She turned the vibrator up as high as it would go, then pressed it into her wet, tight hole. She gasped and groaned with pleasure, elated at the feeling of having something inside of her, finally. She began to fuck herself, slowly at first. She remembered the tantalizingly slow way David had forced his cock inside of her mouth, and the careless way he fucked her face as if it were her pussy...less than that even. It was as if she was less than human, nothing more than a squirming little fucktoy, completely subject to his whims. She drilled herself harder with the dildo, lost in her fantasies. Suddenly, she wasn't just remembering - she was imagining.
What would it feel like to take his cock in her cunt? How would he do it? She knew that was his ultimate goal, and right then, fucking herself wildly with her dildo, she wanted it. She craved the heat of his skin on hers, the soft skin of his cock inside of her, the thrusting, pulsing, pushing of his hips as he plunged himself in and out, again and again, ravishing her, taking her, possessing her -
"Oh, please, please let me come, sir!" she found herself gasping. With a loud cry, Cadence bucked up in the air, her pussy clamping down on the buzzing cock buried inside of her. She rode out her climax, thrusting her hips against it, dragging out little sparks of pleasure that spiked from her cunt and out to her extremities. She rubbed her clit with her other hand, bucking and squirming, luxuriating in her completion...she had only come that hard once or twice before.
But then, a sense of regret. She opened her eyes.
She wanted more.
And she had no fucking clue how she was going to put her dildo back on the coaster without David noticing she'd moved it.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 3 years agoJust started reading your chapters and I know that there more already written. I imagine David is going to be a bit pissed when he finds out that Cadence is not a virgin when he finally takes her. She broke her hymen with her little vibrator that she just used to orgasm hard. Of course he will know what she did and the punishment will be harsh. I wonder what he is going to do when he finds out she is a virgin due to lack of cock but not losing her hymen to him. He says he is a sadist and has hurt her mom but deep down it looks like Cadence will turn out to be a slut too.
writingwhilewetover 7 years agoAuthorI submitted my most recent edit on December 6th - it's still pending, so I'm not really sure where to go from here. I imagine they're dealing with a heavy volume of submissions on the back end. Sorry to everyone for the extended delay.
But just to make sure no one gets their hopes too up - it wasn't altogether that violent or that psychologically challenging. One editor suggested that perhaps the ending just wasn't "happy" enough. I rewrote it, ending it earlier than I had originally.
That being said, I toned it down a little even from where it was and implied more consent on Cadence's side. Hopefully that won't disappoint too many people. I was surprised it was rejected, because I have definitely read much worse on Literotica before, both here and in other categories.
joodleover 7 years agoI have to admit that some (albeit very few) stories are too much for me. Like literally beating someone with malicious intent. Or truly breaking someone--wrecking their mind. I see some of that in my pursuit of the fine line between non-con s&m fantasy and flat out sociopathic rape & violence. How those stories can be approved and yours rejected is perplexing. I'm intrigued to see where this story will go...and if it's too much for even me.
Submissive_Lunaover 7 years agoI can't wait for chapter 2. This is very well written and I really enjoyed it. I was able to put myself into Cadence's place. Keep up the great work!
writingwhilewetover 7 years agoAuthor-- is still incoming! It got caught in the pending period for far longer than 72 hours, so I resubmitted it again. So sorry for the delay, and thank you to everyone who has read and enjoyed chapter one so far!
