Caleb Woke Up Ch. 02a

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McBacon
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She leaned over and gave him a chaste kiss on the cheek.

Anna got out of the car and walked in. As her brother watched, her hips seemed to sway in an exaggerated fashion. Caleb was pretty sure he was just imagining it.

He sat back, heaved a deep sigh through pursed lips and ballooned cheeks. Our protagonist was beginning to think himself crazy. That was the only possible explanation. His sister just wouldn't do something like that.

He grabbed the necklace from off of rear view mirror, put it on, and tucked it under his shirt. He took a couple of big gulps of water from the bottle, and made his way into church.

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TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOG7 months ago

Should have just written "2A" first...this was TOTALLY REPETITIVE...not necessary...

Still, I like sister giving him "unconscious head"...will he remember any of it??

Five Stars...barely...

nighthawk22204nighthawk2220410 months ago

BTW, I read this several years ago, bwfore you added the 2A option, and i find the present chapters much more readable than i recall previously, which was before you had finished all 8 chapters, so i am looking forward to see how he scores with the rest of the ladies he has yet to meet.

nighthawk22204nighthawk2220410 months ago

I like 2A much better, it's always a nice touch to perk up any story with a few random BJ's to give the ladies a chance to show their affection and to give the boys another random wet dream, even if they're asleep. It sure brightened up the inside of the storage unit for Mel, didn't it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
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Your revision of Ch. 2 was right on the mark. It really seemed plausible that Anna would want to make Caleb blow his rocks off for her, even if he was out cold, so that she could get him to do it again when he was awake. Keep on trucking - I hope Caleb finds some future prospects at the choir practice with his sister, and look forward to their drive home, and his next encounter with his HOT mom.

McBaconMcBaconalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks for feedback.

I'll take your advice and swap out.

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