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"I couldn't live without you, Jesse. I was too lonely, and I missed you."
I felt a warm hand touch my arm, and there he was, Jesse... but not Jesse. He was completely naked and the sight of him was familiar and comforting. His hair was just as black, his latte eyes lit up in that old familiar way, but he was different too. His features seemed more pronounced, his muscles more delineated, and his smile was huge on those upturned lips of pink. Even with the surprise in his voice, he seemed pleased to see me.
I put my hand on his shoulder to push him back just a bit so I could admire him. Actually, since I was incapable of falsehood, I am forced to admit that I was looking for the damage to his body that Mitchell had caused. But he was the picture of health. The stab wounds were gone and I breathed a sigh of relief.
I looked down at myself to find my own body naked, and I wondered if I was in heaven. If we both were. At least we were together.
Jesse looked into my eyes and smiled gently. "I put such a burden on you by leaving."
"It's not your fault," I whispered. "We're together now, and that's what is important."
Jesse started to tell me not to be angry, but there was no capacity for anger, and we read each other's minds.
I looked around again. I felt solid under my bare feet but it wasn't like a floor. There was a mist without damp; bright as the sun but not hot. A gray that blended into deep blue beyond infinity. Altogether weird.
"I would say I missed you, but it doesn't feel as if I can because you're already here," Jesse said.
"I'm glad I am." I smiled. "Do you know your way around?"
Jesse nodded and took my hand. "Let me show you." His eyes were twinkling.
"First things first." I took him into my arms. "There's something I have to do right away."
I kissed him very softly and stared into his eyes, relaxing into their beauty. Then he kissed me back.
"That feels nice," I whispered. "I've missed kissing you."
"And holding you," he added. "I love you, Shane."
"I love you too, Jesse. Forever."
"For eternity."
The End
- COMMENTS
cmiextra12 months agoAuthor, I sincerely appreciate your advance warnings about the upcoming tragedy & your offering a more appropriate ending.
Let us not kid ourselves--the stories on this site, no matter how well-written the plots or characters may be, are word porn. Seriously . . . your readers are choosing to read a story where a slutty bi guy suddenly transforms into a faithful gay boyfriend wholeheartedly choosing a fully monogamous relationship in which prostates are always located immediately, anal sex only"pinches" & the pain of penetration melts quickly into only orgasmic bliss.
Why on earth would you think we would suddenly want depressing realism?
LOL, keep writing!
Jerome_Plamondonover 2 years agoThe afterlife scene was a disservice to the story, offering a false triumph.
The author lacked the courage of her convictions, failed the truth.
Cwell69almost 3 years agoO man how you pulled me in I felt I was in the story then when hell broke loose i was angry, heart broken I knew what was coming but I kept reading even though it brought pain 💔 from the past of someone I will never forget I pray this never happens to anyone but we live 8n a cruel messed up world thanks for the emotions and keeping us alive and softening peoples hearts
MidnightShriekabout 4 years agoThe book was cute.
Yes I WAS ready to whoop yo ass for killing my baby.
Yes, I did get the same BrokeBack Mountain vibes.
Yes, I was crying at the funeral with Shane.
But over all it was a cute book. Not allot of stories go into detail about characters on here. Its usually VERY generic.
Its not perfect and there's definitely stuff to be worked on.
But it earns it's high rating.
We stan character development!!!
