They must of seen my father giving me my first orgasm. I could see faint boners pertruding out from inside their swim shorts. I giggled and looked back at my Dad. He was staring at me. "What I asked?"
"You are so beautiful Amanda." With that we kissed passionately and I felt what to come later poking me in the side.
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They must of seen my father giving me my first orgasm
and this is supposed to be erotic?
a father who wants to seduce his daughter, but does it in view of others? in public?
the man is a pervert.
Good premise but would be much better with a slower buildup ...
The trust & love between the two come across well, and the backdrop & premise are good. The eroticism would be much better if it was a slower & gradual build up of incremental crossed lines ...
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I gave a four. I stayed away from the five because of his lapping up her cum. I got questions about that. In my time I've had women who got very juicy, so to speak, and have even managed to get one to expel fluid, I've heard some people call it gush, but never had one cum in such a way I could swallow it.
If you are a woman, you ought to know what you are talking about, but I suspect you are a man and you are just writing a good story. If that's not the case, I've missed a lot in the last seventy years. Why do I mention the above? Well, the closer the story is to the truth, the easier it is to suspend belief and for us normal folks to get into it.
Besides from that, Mrs. Lincoln, I really liked the story. You have talent and should write more.more...
Not bad
Not bad as the story goes, but could she really be that stupid showing herself in a swimsuit that is barely there to her dad?
Never once raised a fuss about where his hands were made her all too willing to do more, adding to the thrill of beng watched while she came.more...
A 5 star submission! Noting; Most 'Anonymous' comments arise from 18+ wankers.
Semi-castrated myself, a pre-pubescent Lolita would be much safer, as my daughter!
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