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"I've never been more turned on. The pictures... mmmm!" She shivered. She'd given me the pictures from the library. I had a short stack of 8x10s in my backpack. They were mostly innocent -- as innocent as you could be, with a stacked blonde girl in a short pink skirt splayed across a guy in the library, their lips moist from kissing. The last two pictures -- she was clearly without underwear, the smooth, glossy skin of her upper thigh and hips in amazing detail. "We have to get a camera for ourselves."
"I was thinking the exact same thing," I said. "So... are you going to fuck him?"
She looked thoughtful. Not defensive, not embarrassed, just considering. "Tyler, I think I have to. I mean, he'sso turned on!"
"Me too," I told her. It was the logical conclusion to all the pain we'd put poor Andrew through. "Just give me all the details, will you? I'm worried I'm going to be jealous."
"Never be jealous," she said, tenderly. "These guys, all these other guys -- they're not you." She gave me a tender kiss.
"And on Monday," I continued, "you're going to hook up with Cappy and the Guido?"
"Mmmm," she smiled, nodding.
"And -- remember the newspaper guy? Who shouts at you when you go by?"
She nodded again, the smile fading. "I don't like it when people are negative towards me."
I pressed on, "Get to know him. Make him a friend. Remember, when guys act out, it's just because they don't know you. They're frustrated."
"And I'm not allowed to leave any guy frustrated, right. I remember." She shrugged. "Okay. On Monday, I'll stop and talk to him."
The look in her eyes gave me no doubt about what she was thinking. She wouldn't end up just talking to him. She never just 'talked' to anybody, anymore.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoI reread this story every couple years - it remains one of my all time favorites and wish more exhib stories were written like this
Anonymousover 17 years agoit break's my heart that this story has to end. carol is such a perfect creation-sexy, witty and fun. i want to follow her around in her future adventures. it would have been sexy to read about Carol once again returning to her dad's workmates for an evening or afternoon of adventures.
flinchny010over 17 years agoAuthorThanks EVERYBODY for the comments! The level of feedback has been great.
The early chapters are indeed the result of a LOT of cutting (they were uncommonly slow and wordy). I'm not surprised there are some continuity problems; I was hoping they would work more as vignettes. The latter half of the 'book', as Carol gets more depraved, were written in one piece, and move more smoothly.
16 chapters total. I know every chapter won't be a home run. But thanks for reading, and thanks for the feedback!
Anonymousover 17 years agoYou weren't kidding when you said this was an earlier effort. It lacks the sheer descriptivenes of the she's...be a star series.
This needs serious re-writing with at least a standard level of descriptivenes, and more continuity- right now the story just randomly bounces around. Maybe it is due to the missing chapters that were lost when your computer crashed.
But I seriously expected much superior work from you.
-A loyal fan
