Carrie then stood up and ordered John to his feet. "You cannot be seen at any time for fear of causing suspicion," she warned, "I intend to move you to another place where no one will find you, but for the moment we are in the beach house and you must be careful not to be noticed. Follow me and I will take you to a room you have not seen before."
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Aaaaaand you just lost me. OK, not true, you lost me at making him run naked then taking everything he owned and his work. But I thought you might pull it out. Good writing, ridiculous concept.
I like the way this is going!
This is very well crafted, and John is one lucky guy.
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