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"fuck me, fuck me, fuck, Fuck, FUCK!"
The relentless assault pushes me over the edge, and I spasm, arms flat against the ground, back arched, nipples thrust like daggers at the sky. My cunt is a fist around his cock, but he pistons on, groaning under the weight of his own need. This goes on forever. I have no idea. When my arms are mine to move again, he's still fucking away, and though my climax is waning, I want to feel him come, want that hot flood deep inside my pussy, want his eyes to close and face to go slack with that look of satisfied exhaustion before he collapses forward onto me. I want it all.
Who wouldn't?
Poor guy needs some help, though, so I twine one arm around him, run my hand up the back of his neck and into his hair. I pull his head down towards me. His eyes are closed, lips parted, breath a fast, steady pulse of air against my collarbone. I shift and reach another long arm down, past my hips, still stretched and deliciously taut as he pinions my knees to my sides. My searching fingers find his sack, and he gasps a little as I stroke it lightly. He redoubles his efforts, and I find myself rocking against him, pulling him in deeper with each thrust. I'm probably not going to come again, but I'm certainly not going to let a fucking like this go to waste.
I still need to fucking feel him come, though, so I close my fingers around his sack and began to squeeze gently, in time with his thrusts. His breath catches. His rhythm accelerates to a frenzy and I know that he's on the edge. I squeeze--hard--and he explodes inside me, thrusting in and in until he can go no further, flooding me with molten cum until it begins to seep out and run in quickly cooling streaks down the crack of my ass. Next time, you're gonna make him fuck you in the ass.
Next time?
Next time.
"Oh...god." That's him, not me, moaning like a dying man into the hollow of my neck, his breath tickling the skin beneath my ear.
"Oh god, indeed," I reply, with the lazy satisfaction of the well and truly fucked.
"So," he asks, as he relaxes his grip on my legs and we collapse into a soft embrace. "Same time next week?"
- COMMENTS
Poorwriterover 5 years agoThat was the most well-written enjoyable story I think I've ever read on Literotica. Thank you so much you're a gifted Talent!
BlueLegumeover 8 years agoAuthorThanks for the feedback, guys! I'm glad (most of you) liked it. I have not written a sequal, but I think I will (you--and by you I mean I--kinda have to be in a certain mood to write this sort of thing, and I just haven't been, lately. Sorry).
Palewriter: I definitely understand. I actually have read one excellent present-tense, second-person novel ("Halting State" by Charles Stross) but I have neither the courage nor technical skill to try something like that, so no worries. I am not entirely sold on the present tense, either--I kept switching back and forth (a bad habit) and kinda settled on present tense because I'd written the first part that way. I do like the sense of immediacy that it has, but it creates some awkward phrasing at times as well.
The first person is really just because, for whatever reason, I feel much more comfortable writing in the first person. I'm not sure why. Maybe the next one will be first person past-tense. I wouldn't count on a proper third-person story from me for a while, though.
Anyway, thanks for the feedback.
kjohns2001over 8 years agoA fun romp that well written. I would love to read more about these characters just to see if they can find something other than just yoga and sex to draw them together.
palewriteralmost 9 years agoat least you didn't do 2nd person present tense. Others will find this wonderful but I just couldn't get through it. Thanks for the submission though.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoThis story is gold. Absolutely perfect! Short enough, but the buildup is amazing. Completely and utterly amazing. And this story is also begging for a part 2. Seriously consider it. I, and I think many others, would read it in a heartbeat.
