Olivia asked, "Finally ready to cum, our slut?"
"Oh God yes," I answered, my need to come overpowering after all this humiliation, fucking, serving and teasing.
Olivia joined me on the couch with a ten inch strap-on, bigger than anything else I had ever had in my cunt or ass. She grabbed my legs and pushed them backwards towards my shoulders before instructing me, "Hold your ankles and don't you dare fucking let go."
"Yes, Mistress," I agreed, grabbing my ankles, thankful for all the years of gymnastics.
Olivia moved on top of me and slid the massive cock into my dripping cunt.
"Oh yeeeeees, fuck your British slut," I screamed, my long bubbling orgasm beginning to rise again as she pumped my cunt with the massive cock.
After a half dozen deep full thrusts, the cock reaching depths inside me never before explored, she pulled out and quickly shoved the long thick cock in my ass.
"Hollllly shiiiiit," I screamed, the return of the intense burn killing my growing orgasm.
"I am going to go back and forth between your two gaping fuck holes until you come, Victoria. No matter how long it takes." Olivia informed me.
Katrina added, as she straddled me, and shoved her plastic cock in my mouth, "And I am going to fuck your face like the dirty whore you are."
My mouth full, my head in a position I couldn't move, the plastic cock gagged me thrust after thrust.
Olivia's cock in my ass pumped in and out, the pain never disappearing at all. For the next few minutes it was like living through a sexual version of Groundhog Day, that funny Bill Murray movie my mom loves, as it was six deep hard thrusts in my cunt, just enough to start the bubbling in my cunt and then six equally hard deep thrusts in my ass that burned like hell. All the while, I continued to be viciously face fucked by Katrina.
Ever so slowly, my ass began to get used to being filled by ten inches of cock and my orgasm began to build.
Olivia started listing all the things she had planned for me, which only increased my pleasure as the thought of giving myself to her mind, body and soul, was a major turn-on, crazy considering my state of mind less than two hours ago.
"Oh Victoria, my little British slave, I have such grand plans for you. Eating each of us out on the bus, including Coach Williams," Olivia began. Coach Williams was a pretty, stern, black physical education teacher who disliked me strongly for not trying out for any sports teams even though I was quite athletic. "Of course, the bus driver will also need to be served with a blow job or a quick, what do you British tarts call fucking? Oh yes, a shag."
Changing to my ass, she continued with her master plan for me. "You will bring me a new pet every month and at least one of them will be a teacher. You will be the glory hole cocksucker at prom and at the grad party since your reputation will no longer matter you will be naked in the living room and all three of your holes will be offered to all our graduating classmates."
The litany of future submissions should have stirred fear and common sense in me. Yet in my state of undeniable hunger my mind was not remotely rational as I was caught in a tsunami of lust.
Olivia again switched to my cunt as my orgasm continued to build.
Katrina pulled out of my mouth, and asked, "Do you accept Mistress Olivia's plans for you?"
As Olivia pounded my cunt, I moaned loudly, "Yeeeeesssss."
"Are you close, Victoria," Olivia asked.
"Yes, Mistress, sooooo close," I whimpered, as she again pulled out of my cunt and again filled my ass.
Katrina pinched my nipples and demanded, "Come you stupid slut."
"Yeeees, I'm your slut," I moaned, my orgasm so close I could taste it and yet refusing to reach the fevered pitch needed to push me over the edge.
"Stupid slut," Katrina corrected.
"Yesssss, I'm your stupid slut," I said, disparaging myself.
"And a bitch," Katrina continued.
"Yeeees, a fucking bitch," I agreed, as the cock filled my cunt again.
Suddenly, as my cunt was getting fucked, Olivia grabbed my ankles and spread my legs wide, and I looked down to see my Mom licking my clit.
I moaned, "Yes, Mommy, lick your slutty daughter's cunt."
A couple strokes later, the dam holding my orgasm back exploded and I screamed, "Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssss."
The rush of pleasure coursed through my very being as Olivia continued fucking my cunt, past the usual six teasing strokes, and my mom continued to lick my clit. The orgasm seemed to be endless as rush after rush of pleasure riddled my body.
Unfortunately, after a couple of minutes, the greatest orgasm in my life began to fade away and the harsh reality of my submission came to light. My brain no longer fogged by uncontrollable lust, I couldn't believe I had given in so easily.
Just as I was thinking about how I failed Mom, she moved up and kissed me, my cum on her lips. She whispered, "I love you Victoria."
"I love you too, Mom," I smiled, remembering that my submission came with a positive. Mother and I were again together, albeit twistedly so.
Olivia, pulling out of my cunt, said to my mother, "Slut, you may go home or sleep over, whatever you wish. Victoria, you will go home with Katrina and live with her for the week as she trains you."
"Yes, Mistress," I agreed, petrified of what Katrina perceived as training, even as my cunt tingled with anticipation.
Katrina pulled me up, put a collar on me with a leash and tugged. Naked except for thigh highs, I was led out of the house, into the dark evening, and to her car. My head spinning with consequence, potential and change, I wondered if I had ever even had a chance to defeat Olivia. It seemed unlikely in retrospect and it no longer mattered, I was hers now and although at times of clarity I cursed my weakness, I wouldn't have it any other way.
Epilogue:
The next couple of months, I did indeed pleasure every cheerleader on the bus, including Coach Williams, who kept me in her hotel room for a night of lengthy submission (she loved getting her ass licked and probed), and the bus driver who loved shooting his load down my throat. I also pleased the cheerleaders after every practice, washing their bodies in the shower, licking their salty sweaty pussies, tits and feet, and occasionally cleaning their pussies after they peed.
I did seduce and bring Tamara to Olivia as well as another friend Skyler. Lastly, although it was a challenge, I also brought her Mrs. Potter, my chemistry teacher.
At prom, I was in a stall in the boy's bathroom which had a glory hole where I sucked over fifty cocks, before taking five in my cunt and the last five in my ass.
Lastly, at the graduation party, I was revealed as the submissive, slut I was when I was gangbanged by dozens of guys, as well as eating a couple dozen cunts.
The following fall, I went to college with Olivia where I became the sorority pet for the next four years, serving all my sorority sisters night and day and sleeping in my pet house (which was a large dog house), unless a sister allowed me to sleep with her.
When Olivia married, I moved in with her and became her full service maid. Besides pleasuring Mistress and Master, I also did all the duties of a maid.
Today, I am carrying their child. Olivia did not want to have her perfect body ruined by carrying a child and thus I was instructed to carry their child. I am currently seven months pregnant and am about to make my fourth pregnant porn film; apparently that is a popular niche online. The first was a gangbang video, the second a lesbian orgy with fisting, the third an incest video with Mom that is apparently going viral and today another gangbang, this time with all black college students.
Getting dressed in a wedding dress for the scene, I looked into the mirror and barely recognized myself. I had become exactly what Olivia said I was and...as I mentioned before...I wouldn't have it any other way.
THE END of OLIVIA WINS...
AUTHOR'S FINAL NOTE:
This story was a lot of fun to write. But as Team Victoria and Team Olivia camps began to form the pressure to write a great ending was slightly overwhelming. That said, I think, I hope, I did so with the three alternate endings.
So please comment on which of the three alternate endings you liked the best (on the assumption you liked one the best):
Catching Mommy: Victoria Wins
Catching Mommy: Win Win For All
Lastly, thanks for supporting this and all my other stories through your comments, e-mails and votes.
Jasmine February 2014
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Awesome
Awesome that Olivia wins in my eyes its the only one that really made sense for me with how the characters developed.
this ending suckeed
You ruined the story, this ending was not sexy or arousing, it made me hate the players all of them, her abusive mother, the traitor friends and eventually even Victoria.
This ending should have never left your editing tablet, is absolutely your worse effort at erotica ever. Sorry if that upsets or disturbs you, but I wanted you to know the truth ... every other story of yours I have read I absolutely enjoyed and was impressed with your imagination and story telling talents.more...
Olivia wins
That was totally awesome - always knew Victoria was going to loose and that Olivia was the strongest of them all - as it says she is the queen bee - I have read all of the entire series and all three alternate endings 3 times now and this was the best - (I am am middle age white male) - your writing is excellent and no matter how many negative moments you get - KEEP writingmore...
I'm not really a fan of alternative endings as I believe it takes away a lot of the emotion you feel when you finish reading, it can also be seen as a easy way out by the author: letting the readers make the decision for you. But judging by the feedback generated maybe I'm in a minority.
For me there is only one ending, and that's with Olivia winning. The others were good and well written but come completely out of the left field. Nowhere in the story is there a hint that Olivia would back down or even consider sharing, while Victoria is often having doubts and showing weaknesses. The fact that she seduced her own mother, following a command from her enemy, while trying to rationalize it as being a way to defeat Olivia shows that subconsciously she was already submitting. Maybe I'm going too deeply into it, maybe I'm seeing something that wasn't there but these things are what makes a story all the more readable in my opinion.
Although I liked the "Olivia wins," ending I did think it went a little too far. The whole story was quite over the top with girls seducing women and turning everybody into willing slaves at the click of a finger, but that's what makes it so good, and there was enough kinky lesbian sex to satisfy anyone. But rather than making Victoria a submissive pet, it seems that you have just destroyed her future and even her life. Maybe this was your intention, and as the author that's entirely your choice, but I would like to imagine a little more resistance and less enjoyment from Victoria as she is humiliated.
You already know about my other (insignificant) gripes, so I won't go over them. All in all, and despite the things I've mentioned I loved it. Very hot and very enjoyable.
Perhaps we could have a separate story focusing on Olivia, giving us more insight into her, and even a glimpse of how she trains Victoria.
Thanks and five stars from me.more...
A BIG TURN OFF
This ending was a big turn off.. you give power to only one fucking character and make other look like losers as if no one else in the society has balls. Why the fuck I read this anyway?
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