I obviously didn't know what was going through Greg's head. I knew what would have been going through MY head had that been me. I just ran with that. I feel for him and the choice that he is faced with. Alicia did him very wrong, regardless of her reasons. Not sure if I am routing for reconciliation or divorce in this situation. I have to be honest. Of course I am partly biased since Greg is my friend.
And of course, Superman would so completely beat the Hulk. I agree with Greg on that. Heat vision, flying, super speed. No contest. Unless there is Kryptonite. Neither here nor there.
As I said before, I may revisit this story later if things become clearer. I could simply add my own ending to it, but I want to leave that option open in case reality turns out to be better than fiction. I invite any author to continue with his own interpretation on what the ending should be. I would be very interested to see what you guys come up with. If I revisit this story, I will be very curious to see if any of you came close to the truth.
Thank you for reading.
Once again, Nonethewiser is awesome for his editing. Any mistakes made when I transferred his corrections to my story is not a reflection on him.
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I disagree with comments you should have finished the story regardless of no facts
Glad you did a after the party follow-up. Going to read it now so I can sleep tonight
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The author should have used enough creative license to actually finish the story as well as fleshing out the story a bit, preferable by burning the threesome after the way the husband was humiliated and disrespected .
More importantly, to give him a happy ending with someone else after the divorce.more...
I do truly love this tale, as it gets right into the heart. Five stars.
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I think the point is not that she decided to cheat rather than speaking to her husband about how she felt, but that she felt rejected and unattractive. It was in that vulnerable state that she sought out her friend, had too much to drink, and was taken advantage of. Doesn't excuse her behavior, but if her friend was truly her friend, she would have told her to talk to hubby. That is why the second part is so heart wrenching. She chooses the friend over her marriage. It is almost like she failed to truly get what her friend had actually done. Despicable.more...
Reading Yet AGAIN! (So much crap lately!)
"Honey, don't tell me you're jealous." - You don't have to be "jealous" to be uncomfortable with a situation concerning you wife and another man!
I do not believe for a SECOND that he rebuffed her advances, even if she was HALF as hot as described! A wife is FAR more likely to rebuff her husband, and only Neanderthals or misogynists would accept his cheating in response.
If she is CLAIMING this, it is only in an attempt to try to justify her cheating!
In any case,no matter HOW much he has been "neglecting" her, the proper course of action is to TALK to him, not go swinging with her best friend and best friend's husband who she KNOWS her husband at best tolerates!more...
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