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Rick collapsed on the couch. Janie panted, coming down, but she didn't move.
Neither of them could make out the voice:
"Wow."
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It took a few minutes to normalize after the session. Janie stayed on the floor for a few minutes, sore, as the guys milled about. The party broke up soon after that. From lunch to drunk, through football and groping and on to final orgasm was barely six hours. The four friends had crossed a threshold, blown through taboos, created new connections… but real life went on.
Dave had an 0400 shift and had to get real sleep. He wasn't sure how that was going to work out: he was either going to sleep like a log or he wouldn't sleep for a week. Tonight had been heavy.
Brian and Bill both had civilian 9 am workdays, but Brian's ankle was so tweaked that he couldn't drive. Bill offered himself as taxi service and they left soon after Dave.
This left Rick and Jane alone. The television and the radio were off; the place was dead silent. Everything looked the same, it all looked normal – yet it felt like they were in another universe. Rick cleaned the party remains from around the townhouse and Janie cleaned herself.
As Rick poured salsa into plastic containers, he swore he could smell Listerine. A beat later, Janie came around into the kitchen. Her skin was glowing pink, freshly scrubbed. She looked at him, her lips parted, her eyes questioning.
I was wrong before, he thought. He set down the salsa, stepped over and enveloped her in a kiss. Their lips merged and their arms wrapped around each other. He took her breath away as their souls melted into one another. She is the most beautiful… Right Now.
- COMMENTS
TatankaBillabout 1 year agoWell, that was a beautiful slow burn that ignited in a hurry. Great buildup, dialogue, great action! What's not to like? I also like that he had occasional twinges of jealousy early on. As much as you love the whore how could you not? A woman who can suck four men into submission like this is indeed a goddess.
Anonymousover 13 years ago"authors" like this one should go back to street sweeping.
Anonymousover 13 years agoYou are a master. Best I've read in a long time. Sexy? Yes! But the story line was great, and I laughed almost all the way through ... You should be writing non-XXX as well. Terrific!
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoSo, I hope there'll be yet another adventure of Rick and Janie, perhaps picking up from Rick's response in regard to the "pictures" comment by one of his friends. Because of the great dialogue in Spalding's stories, I think it would be fun to read about the couple's planning for a get together to film Janie's slutish behavior. This time they would have to set a date, send invitations, arrange for a cameraman. Maybe they could combine it with a pre-wedding celebration just for his friends. There would be no question about what the party was about so the guys could plan in advance by refraining from any ejulatory activities in order to be loaded for the festivities. Perhaps Janie could dress appropriately as well. I think it would be a fine tribute to the couple from the first thick spurt to the last. What better tribute could there be? When she smiles at Rick and her mouth opens he'll be able to see the strands of cum in her teeth and when she reaches for his hand with hers the camera can record the sight of her long, slender fingers webbed with shimmering cum.
It's a classy story about consenting daults enjoying adventures of nasty, sleazy sex.
Wilson Spaldingalmost 19 years agoAuthorGood and bad alike, thank you for taking the time to make comments.
(*) Nightowl: I hope you *can* imagine! And if you can't, let the images do the talking.
(*) Joey: Stay tuned...
(*) Larry: Thanks for the kind words. You're right, I've tried to give each a slightly different feel, a variation on moods and settings to keep it interesting. And as for message...? Yeah, I have a few of them in there, the most important showing how a kinky relationship stays healthy through communication... though to be honest, I never really thought anybody would ever pick up on *any* message in my erotica.
(*) Anonymous in USA: Have some patience, amigo: the overall story arc is about swinging, not cuckolding, but you can't fit *everything* into a single chapter.
...A note about that: The characters are struggling to keep balance in a philosophical, psychological and morally relative sort of way. If you've read the past chapters (and, oh, say, the disclaimer), then you know the action in Chapter 5 was foreshadowed like crazy. If you want to see what's in store for Rick and Janie, look at the details in the narrative and you'll find hints of stories to come (balance galore). You might also find a red herring or two in future chapters [and other plot "easter eggs" not typically found in erotica but that have a strangely natural fit].
(*)(*)FINALLY: I appreciate the "Hot" 100 ratings as much as the next writer, but for my own comment, I could only give myself a 75. I'm reasonably happy with the overall effort, but as I read through it, I found a couple of bone-headed typos. For the editings slips I subjected you all to, I gotta accept the hit. Sorry about that and thanks for tolerating it.
Yours in small doses,
Wilson Spalding
