Chances

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We made slow deliberate love this time I was able to last much longer and by the time I cummed, she had gone through several orgasms. We didn’t even bother covering up and just slept on the covers that night. When I woke up the next morning, Christy was gazing at me with a huge smile on her face.

“What’s so amusing?” I asked.

‘I realized that we never gave you an answer on whether we would be staying, but I’m sure last night should be sufficient enough answer.” Then her expression changed to one of seriousness. “I love you so much and I hope you realize that now there are two people involved.”

“Like I told you some time back, the next time I fall in love I’ll they come first and that’s a promise I intend to keep. Now how do we tell Cindy?”

“Just tell her that mummy and daddy will be sleeping in the same bed.”

“Don’t you think that’s a bit direct?”

“You seem to underestimate her intelligence she’s quite sharp you know.”

We decided to clean up and took our time washing each other. The rest of the day was spent moving her stuff to my room and by the time Vicky brought Cindy back everything was all settled down.

I must admit I was a bit nervous about talking to Cindy because now our relationship was entering a new dynamic and wasn’t quite sure how she would react, but she didn’t really care as long as I continued being her dad and loved her.

To be continued

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Interesting

It took a second to get used to the grammar mistakes. But then as I continued to read the story, I realized that the grammar might BE intentional. I've encountered this before, when someone is writing a "saga" style story. It also portrays the main protagonist's state of mind, which if you've ever gotten to know many progammers, is pretty indicative of the way they think. Thoughts tend to run together in their minds, which sometimes makes their thought proccesses kinda hard to understand. Anyways, as far as the story-line goes, it's simplistic, idealistic, and quite predictable, but also very fitting to one of the the "programmer's family fantasy" stereotypes I have run into before. I would have to read more of the author to determine if this is intentional or not, if intentional, and meant to be this way, than it rates a decent score as a pulp romace. However, they call pulp romance "pulp" for a reason. It gets very repetitive in theme. Hopefully this author has more up his sleve than stereotype.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Eh?

really, now? is that how "romance" happens? i thought that's just mostly exchanging bodily fluids, with both author and his characters confusing them for "love" and "romance" ---- for, a few weeks or months later, when the impulsive "thrilling" kisses had become stale, boring,,, the lines would be more like:

"this was a big mistake; our genitals did most of the 'talking' and it seemed good; but now, well, we have nothing in common"

actually, that's what happened to both of these two people's respective partners previously,,,

liquidairdreamsliquidairdreamsover 19 years ago
Sweet, Romantic, Wonderful!

Whoever bitched about the grammar was looking for a problem - I'm usually a stickler for that kind of thing, but didn't see anything that distracted me from really getting into the story...

Hope to see more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Awful!

This had so many grammatical errors, run on sentences, and misspellings I gave up after a few pages. It was a waste of time writing it, and a waste of time reading it. I can see why the author does not accept personal comments. They surely would not be flattering.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
A lovely story

It's good to see characters that actually learned from their previous mistakes, who go on to find new partners and create a new loving relationship!

Top marks for a very real to life story.

Kydreamer

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