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Click here"Can you please give us some space?" I requested.
"No, I don't think that would be wise," Alice countered.
"Fine, whatever," I shrugged. "What's the news, girls?"
"They sent 40 of our people to the infirmary," Rio said while glaring at Alice. "They preferred to shove us down stairs. Barbie Lynn hurt her knee and Pandora Jaspers bust her scalp open."
"Alice, you are going to go out and sit on the sofa now," I told her.
"No, I am not," she responded.
"This is your last chance to keep things civil, Alice," I cautioned her.
"You seem to have forgotten why I am here," Alice replied.
"I haven't forgotten, Alice, but you clearly don't understand the cost of that decision," I said.
"What is that supposed to mean?" she shot back.
"Ladies, I'll see you tomorrow, but we clearly aren't going to be given any common courtesy tonight," I told my ladies. Rio came up, kissed me hungrily, and then glared at Alice.
"Cordelia needs to see you at the corner of the Clegger Building at 12:15," Iona whispered in my ear as she hugged me. I gave her a wink as we parted. The girls left and I had to put up with Alice for an hour as she tried to make conversation and I did my best to ignore her.
"Zane," Dana Gorman called out as I reclined on a sofa and Alice skulked around.
"Over here," I motioned.
"You have been temporarily reinstated by the Review Board," she informed me. "Don't waste this opportunity." It was 8:00 o'clock at night so I had to wonder what discussions had taken place.
"Am I supposed to be grateful?" I scoffed. "I didn't hear an apology for treating us students so shabbily, nor Heaven being re-admitted. All you did is give us something today that you plan to take away tomorrow."
"Don't be an idiot," Dana snapped. "You aren't in a position to make demands."
"Well, it was nice to see you, Dana," I shrugged. "I am sorry about this morning. You were very impressive, by the way." Dana shook her head in disgust and left.
"You shouldn't have been mean to Coach Gorman," Alice scolded me. I shrugged.
Alice tried to be nice, insisting she wasn't in the way, but ended up staying with me until my last bathroom break. I pretty much hated her.
- COMMENTS
FinalStandalmost 5 years agoAuthorI am monitoring my feedback and loving your chapter synopsis so far. Mostly I'm burying myself in my writings - still aiming for the 2,500 words a day plus some editing. This also means I have a backlog of e-mails I need to respond to. Sorry gang.
James aka FinalStand
P.S. I'm getting off my ass and submitting a story tonight.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoJAMES! so good that you are still monitoring your stories feedbacks, and maybe you'll be continuing to add to some of your wonderful works of light-hearted erotic fiction like this Christian College comedy I so enjoy, yeah! Welcome back and I sincerely hope you are healthy and happy! Take care.
JC_The_Continuerover 5 years agoEveryone knows about a certain gunshot, a certain Arch-Duke and a certain fallout.
Am I seeing similarities? Hrmmm...
FinalStandover 5 years agoAuthorThank you for your kind comment. I wrote my High School English final's term paper on the Elric of Melniboné Saga so I like occasionally referencing it. Besides, how could Rio not know something written by an author whose name is Moorcock? ;)
Take care,
James aka FinalStand
Dick_Richardover 5 years agoI've been reading stories on this site for some years now, first time I have ever come across and Elric of Melniboné reference... Great writing, great story, thanks!
