"Adam...I don't think you were supposed to do that..."
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An woken Elle
^^^
Plus slide/slid and lots more. Some attention to basic spelling and grammar could have made this a good read - instead, it's an annoying read. (Rule # 1: Don't annoy the reader)
awesome first story
loved the way they fucked. I was hard the entire time
Nice first effort
I love your nom de plume.
Do you see yourself more as Electra or Iphigenia?
Excellent little story
Tenderness, humor, lust, trust, and surprise at the end. Really, a very nice little story. For some of us, a lot closer to real than fiction.
To Houseatreus
I'll be the first to admit that I'm not a fan of the word, except when using it to describe certain political figures, exes, and bad drivers (and yes, I use the word to describe both genders.) I was merely stating that it was overused to describe your (or whom ever) vagina. There are a great many other words that can be used to describe that most wonderful area of the female body.
Now, with that being said, if you choose for your characters dialogue to only use that word because they're too uninformed to use others, so be it. I was only suggesting that in the narrative, maybe some other words can be used, such as quim, gash, slit, channel, pussy, twat... you get the picture.more...
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