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Click here"Fuck me, baby. You feel so good. I want you to come in me."
The frame of the bed moans, and creaks with the motion of us.
Thrusts and cries of pleasure fill the room creating a tune of desire.
Our movements quicken, faster, and faster.
With one final lunge your cock explodes your load into me.
We fall, entwined under the blankets, into a satisfied mass of sweat, come, and peace.
Holding on for dear life, we drift into a rejuvenating slumber...
"Running in the arms of a new lover"
How do you run in someone's arms?
Whatever. That's as far as I bothered reading.
I don't know if it really matters, but it helps the reader "care" about them. The sex was good but pretty much a "quicky" as far as I can tell. I assume that there are going to be more parts to this story. Tell us about these 2 sexy people.
Keep at it. Practice, practice, practice. Good job. I am no expert, just making personal observations as a reader.
Are these lovers, cheaters, spouses, does it not matter? The sex is grand, but the context drives the impact of the story. Passion is illusory and temporary, adultery is forever.