"Fuck me, baby. You feel so good. I want you to come in me."
The frame of the bed moans, and creaks with the motion of us.
Thrusts and cries of pleasure fill the room creating a tune of desire.
Our movements quicken, faster, and faster.
With one final lunge your cock explodes your load into me.
We fall, entwined under the blankets, into a satisfied mass of sweat, come, and peace.
Holding on for dear life, we drift into a rejuvenating slumber...
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How?
"Running in the arms of a new lover"
How do you run in someone's arms?
Whatever. That's as far as I bothered reading.
Who are these folks?
I don't know if it really matters, but it helps the reader "care" about them. The sex was good but pretty much a "quicky" as far as I can tell. I assume that there are going to be more parts to this story. Tell us about these 2 sexy people.
Keep at it. Practice, practice, practice. Good job. I am no expert, just making personal observations as a reader.more...
Context not important?
Are these lovers, cheaters, spouses, does it not matter? The sex is grand, but the context drives the impact of the story. Passion is illusory and temporary, adultery is forever.
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