I won't ever take you in pain and fear, Little One, Raeden assured him. When we make love, it will be the most wonderful experience of your life.
Kim believed him and his fear dissipated. Then, in the quiet moment that followed, they heard a low moan. Kim's head snapped up and he became aware of his surroundings again. The coppery smell of blood still permeated the air and the bodies of the mangled quents still lay in grotesque disarray about the room. The moan had come from Brian, the quent who Raeden's lizard-monster—Kim could not think of the creature as Raeden himself—had thrown against the wall.
"I guess he's not dead," Kim said, his voice tight with emotion.
Raeden let out a low growl and Kim tensed as another frisson of fear ran through him.
"He doesn't deserve to live," Raeden said, "but I won't kill him now."
"We need to get out of here." Kim was suddenly panicked. "We ... you've killed two people. If they find out, they'll ... well, I don't know what will happen, but we need to go. Now!"
"No," Raeden said calmly. "It's already too late."
"Too late? What do you mean?"
Raeden nodded toward the window. Outside the last vestiges of twilight were fading from the sky. In the silence that permeated the room, Kim heard the distinctive drone of a flyer engine. Multiple flyer engines. It was rare to see the vehicles in Zonei. They were used by the wealthy for transportation in the upper zones and by CorpSec when they were closing in on a criminal.
Kim's heart jumped into his mouth. "Morf!" he cried. "Raeden, morf and run. They won't be able to catch you."
"Oh, yes they will," Raeden said. "How do you think they found me? They must have implanted a tracking devise. And they know about you too by now," he added. "They'll have already scanned the building and taken note of your heat signature. Neither one of us can get away. It's best if we face this together."
"But, Raeden! They'll kill you."
"Maybe. Maybe not."
Kim didn't understand how Raeden could be so calm when his own chest felt ready to explode.
Then one of the windows on the far end of the room shattered inward, glass flying.
Get on my back, Raeden ordered. When Kim hesitated, he added, Now!
With Raeden's help, Kim shifted around so that he clung to Raeden's broad back, wrapping his legs around the mod's torso.
Raeden stood tall and still. Kim watched with horror, peeking over Raeden's shoulder, as a small drone flew into the room and approached them.
Raeden spoke to it. "I'm sure you already know that I'm Raeden Dearborn, 874928634. I have rebonded and—"
Raeden stopped speaking when a small projectile shot from the drone and buried itself in his neck. Kim felt the body beneath him growing and shifting, felt the warm flesh give way to hard scales, and then they were falling.
Raeden crashed forward onto the floor and Kim rode him down, pulling his feet out of the way so they wouldn't get crushed by Raeden's weight when he landed. Kim found himself crouched on the floor next to his unconscious protector. The scales melted back into Raeden's flesh as he returned to his normal state. Kim was relieved to see that he was still breathing.
The drone hovered, whirring quietly. Kim cowered behind Raeden's still form, staring at it fearfully, trying to figure a way out of their current situation.
Then he heard the clamor of many booted feet running on wood. His gaze shifted to the door in time to see a troop of heavily armed men in full riot gear pour into the room.
One of the foremost men raised his weapon and fired. Kim felt a sting in his neck and the world disappeared into darkness.
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still reading. Love d story
OMG, ur great... Really really great. I thought the linked minds idea was already done in hypnotic. But still, great story. Who am I kidding???? Awesome story!!!
What that last anon said...
How CAN anyone be so talented? Hehe. I'll admit, I read the last 3 chapters on the Lit app on my phone, and for whatever silly reason, you can only vote on the app, but not comment. And then I come home at the end of the day and forget to comment, because I have the short-term memory of a goldfish.
So here was another great cliffhanger of a chapter. I liked Kim's freakout at seeing Raeden fully morfed and causing extensive carnage. I think the easy path a lot of authors would have taken would have been having Kim be all, "Oh great! You're here! Thanks!" But really, a person would freak out if they saw a severed head on the floor, so thanks for keeping it real (as real as it can get with a giant lizard man in the room!). Also really enjoyed the intro bit with the Dylan guy (is that the right name?) and a slice of his routines, enough to show us that Raeden's activities were not going unnoticed, so the reader can expect some drama to come on that front. Also liked the variety you gave to the personalities of the quents, which we got to see via Kim's picking up on their thoughts. It would have been easy to just make them all anonymous, single-note baddies, but even in the short glimpse of them we got, they were all individuals. I feel like there were probably more awesome things I noticed while I was reading, but alas, that was while I was at work, and now I'm home, and hey - what am I doing in the kitchen again? See what I mean? What year is this? Who's the president? Ronald Reagan? The ACTOR? Anyway, swank job once again. Excited for more. 5 starsmore...
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How can someone be so talented? Please next chapter next chapter. epic story
Yes!!
Love every second of this story. I read a lot of books. Sometimes going through 10 novels a month. I check here regularly to see if my favorite stories have any new chapters. Can't wait till the next chapter!!
TMmore...
Amazing
This is such a beautiful story. Beautiful erotica, beautiful SF, beautiful romance... altogether it's just great, beyond any literary genre. Standing ovation.
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