"Cindy, you must have done a helluva cleaning job. Wei Chuan just called and confirmed the deal."
Cindy felt elated as she walked into James big arms.
"Come on little one" James said patting her bottom tenderly, "we're going out to celebrate!"
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Duh!
There likely no girl this stupid in the world, but you found her in your mind.
ready for the next chapter please
I'm really enjoying this story so please don't be one of those writers who start something and then fail to finish it, for whatever reason.
Great Chapter
Very nice installment in an awesome series. The interaction between Cindy and the guys in the first part was great. A bit more detail on the Asian girl would have been nice. Can't wait to see this story continue. The characters are fantastic.more...
thank you for continuing this story series. it is my favourite and I realy liked the new chapter.
Not as good as previous ones. Make them longer, more similar to the other ones please.
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