- BDSM
- Claiming Katy Ch. 19
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-Marie's Statement:
I lay peaceful in Katy's embrace, content to be utterly passive for now. Perhaps forever. Katy was slithering gently against me, positioning herself so that we lay side by side, faces together but no longer kissing. I still felt her hand penetrating me, barely moving now, but it was a warm, reassuring sensation which I didn't want to lose.
I felt light and carefree for the first time in months. I knew this was in part because I had just cum for the first time in months, but so much now was clear, simple and easy, where before there had only been uncertainty.
I was owned again, and would have instruction and discipline. I could offer up everything I owned and it would be taken from me. I knew I had submitted to a terrifying mistress, but nothing less would have been good enough and I also knew how content Katy was at Sophie's feet.
And Katy... sweet, silly, beautiful...
"I love you Katy," I whispered, and my voice was weaker and drier than I intended. She didn't respond, but after a moment her face shifted and she looked at me with her large, dark eyes.
"You're naked," she breathed. "Naked. Helpless. You own nothing. You control nothing." I gave a tiny nod and Katy whispered, "Say it again."
Our eyes were inches apart, and our bodies were locked together.
"I love you Katy." If anything I sounded feebler this time.
Katy's fingers started moving slowly inside me, sliding easily against slick, sensitive flesh.
"You're nothing. You're nobdy. You're mine. Say it again."
"I love you Katy."
"I love you Madame."
Madame. So silly. But I couldn't protest. I closed my eyes and allowed myself to be kissed. She kissed gently, but she didn't stop. She didn't stop for a long time.
-The End
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI've read this story numerous times. I can't
tell you just how much I love it. In essence it is a love story. I cried alot. I sincerely hope you will pick this up again later. I love the characters, especially Katy. I would love to catch up with them again. I can think of many ways you could continue, but of course it is your story. And it'seems perfect as is.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoThanks for this compelling story with it's surprising twist in the end.
Although it's still hard for me that Sophie was sometimes so cruel & her slave/s liked it like that (a notch less would make it more accessible for me) - I found it an intriguing, interesting & very well thought through story. You seldomly read stories with this depth.
Also I was curious if you wrote more stories & stumbled over your profile. I was surprised to read you are a straight male, because you seldomly find that a man would write a long story such as that entirely about female characters without ANY male characters involved. Now I'm wondering (in a positive way) what the motivations could be for a man to do that. ;)
You certainly managed to write those characters well!
graymangazerover 7 years agoGreat story, well thought out and very well written. All the characters were very believable, yes it was harsh in places but there are people who really do follow this lifestyle and are never happier than when they are abusing or being abused.
I loved the ending, I must admit that I didn't see it coming but I'm glad everyone was happy. It does however, leave us wondering if there'll be some kind of followup. It appears that Sophie does in fact love Katy, maybe not like a lover but as an owner loves a valued possession, and will probably feel the same for Marie. So will she add Tara to her collection and maybe even the doctor? Or could she perhaps persuade the doctor to become her lover and join her in the domination of Katy, Marie and Tara? So many wonderful scenarios.
I do have one small gripe, and it is small: I thought the punishments were a little repetitive regarding all the kicking and trampling, nothing wrong with it as I can understand that a sadist would use any form of abuse to practice their fetish, I would have liked some variety mixed in ie. Bondage, more clamps, bondage, oops! Did I already mention bondage? Sorry but that's just me, I really did enjoy every small humiliation and punishment you so perfectly described.
All in all it was a wonderful, engrossing tale, and I genuinely liked each and every character, I would love to read more about them.
Thank you,
Anonymousover 7 years agoThis was a great saga! And for some reason, I kept imagining Sophie as Sophie Turner :D
Randee1958about 8 years agoSo I just finished all 19 chapters and I really wish that I wouldn't have given its those scores that I did . I hope to see more about the story as you set up some good storylines to go with extending it . I'm going to give the whole series a š°š+5š
