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Click hereExhausted, he collapsed on top of her as they panted together, her arms and legs still wrapped around him, their heads still spinning. After a few moments he rose up a bit on his elbows and gently touched her forehead, noticing how she trembled when he did, and he swept a few stray tendrils of hair out of her glistening flushed face.
"What was that all about?" he laughed breathlessly, marveling at the woman beneath him who no more than an hour ago was just his "old friend 'Lys."
She looked up at him, suddenly a bit shy again, and shrugged with a smile, "It's Valentine's Day."
They both laughed as she rose to kiss him again, this time not insistent and lustful but familiar and warm.
"But we both hate Valentine's Day, so what does that have to do with anything?" he asked.
"Well," she sighed, looking a bit sheepish, "it seemed like a good time to try something that may be really stupid."
He laughed again and kissed her, then rolled onto his back and panted beside her for a few moments more before turning onto his side and playing with her hair.
"You know," he said, trying to hide a grin, "I'm closing again tomorrow night..."
that story was perfect. i liked teh development of the characters and it got where it needed to go....thanks
I did so enjoy your first sweet and sassy offering! In agreement about developing the plot a bit further. It would be nice to see more about their relationship. What led Alyssa to take this step with him? Maybe we could see her emotions and hesitations before entering the library, or even as she's standing there in front of him. Goodluck and PLEASE continue writing and submitting :)
~LunaEroticaMystica
I really liked this story and loved the idea of a sexy librarian. I'd love to read more of your stories. Good luck in the contest.
I love the library setting and found the story very well written. Needs more development before sex and you can never have too much foreplay. I hope there friendship can transcend into a wonderful relationship as some can. Don't be afraid to let her scream his name or let out a keening wail of ecstasy etc. It can be fun to see what all else your characters can do other than moan and groan.