- Loving Wives
- Co-Wife
- Page 4
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Click hereI gradually became very fond of Gita, as she was by nature, a honest and very devoted family person. I got a lot of respect from her, and Sunil always treated me with anything I wanted. When I was having periods, he would fuck Gita exclusively, at other times, I would get the first fuck of the night.
How we spent our lives together hereon will be the subject of my next story. Please do send me your valuable comments and feedback, which would help me a lot and make the further continuation of my story writing very enjoyable and fulfilling
... love you all...
Mansi...
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Epilogue
Mansi, has not replied as on date, and I am looking forward to Mansi's comments on my taking her story into translation and extension of the theme.
As requested in the prologue, I am happy to receive and incorporate suggestions to extend the potential of this storyline.
Andhravadoo
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoplease write part 2 ,3, 4 of this.
being an indian male , i really realy liked the story. if you write the next parts, write detailed descriptions of romance between sunil and both his wives. give detailed writing about his lovemaking with each of them seperately. i would really like to see both wives keeping karva chauth vrat for him and him blessing both after that. how he made both of them pregnant and all those aspects can be covered
andhravadooover 2 years agoAuthorHi maxwell_4,
Thanks and a personal bonus to all who commented.
I was experimenting to start writing for Literotica, when I came across this story, written in Hindi. I found it very erotic. I had stripped nude on lay in bed reading the story on one laptop and writing on another. My dick was really hard all the time.
I was fondling myself, and fingering my arsehole as well.
I nearly came a few time but I held back, hoping to have a real good spurt.
In between the writing, and reading and scrolling thru X-videos, I was having a gala time. Watched Pawn shop, Cougars, College hazing and drifted to gay, which I rarely see. I saw two Brazilian dudes going at each other, boy, I nearly came that time. Man, I wondered at some of the small chances at man to man I had and missed. I was hard as a steel rod. And my cock was throbbing like hell.
But I kept translating and writing. And imagining more things than the original author.
At the end of the first draft, I could not hold myself back more, and slowly poking and pushing my finger in the pucker, and fingering the knob of my manhood, I shot the cream on myself, and allowing myself to relax, I licked my cum and tasted my own fruit. Umm, delicious.
maxwell_4over 2 years agoYou should have concentrated more on co wife but only one and half page is devoted to it. Moreover, when Gita was earning then why would she prefer to serve you.
andhravadooalmost 8 years agoAuthorI am envious of your happy state with two wives. Do write back sometime
