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Click hereShe was moaning and breathing so hard she worried Justine would hear, she buried her face to moan or bit Edie's shoulder. Beth could feel every movement of his cock in her, her pussy was stretched as far as it could to accommodate how thick he was.
He was sweating, holding her sides to help pull her back on to him, but she was so eager for each thrust she was pushing back. Her grool made strings between their legs each time he pulled away and his balls slapped her stomach.
Edie held and played with her breast, and was fingering herself beneath the action. Her little hand left Beth's breast and held her neck. Edie was moaning quietly as she worked her finger in and out, egging Beth on.
"Fuck him, take it all-" She cried softly. "Drain him into you over and over." Beth wailed into her ear.
"Ahhh fuck... I can't hold it, I'm so close." Beth moaned loudly.
"Do it, climax on his big dick. Cum, cum for me." Edie moaned holding her neck and hair.
"Cyrus... Cyrus... I'm... I'm cumming!" Beth cried, her whole body trembling, her wetness leaking and dripping freely on the sheets "Fuck! Oh fuck!" She screamed her hips rocking violently and her shoulders sagging, resting her breasts on Edie.
Edie was frantic, her face flushed and red, one hand aggressively groping her own breast, the other working to fit two fingers into her pussy. Beth kept fucking, riding through the orgasm, Cyrus' shaft sliding quickly in and out of her. She whimpered loudly, sensitive from climaxing. She held up a hand for a reprieve. Cyrus stopped and let his cock slide free of her. She panted loudly, still shaking but Edie was scrambling beneath her.
Lost to her own ministrations Edie's fingers were soaked and furiously moving in and out of her. "I'm sorry, I'm sorry, it was so hot... watching you fuck was so hot. I'm so close."
Beth slid off the bed and Cyrus moved back to allow her, his member swaying- still hard, Beth's wetness dripping down his shaft. Beth eased Edie's hand and pulled it free, pulling her legs open.
Beth's head leaned in and her tongue started to tickle Edie's pussy, licking up the glossy wetness that covered it, toying with her clit. Beth slid a finger in as she began eagerly tonging Edie's folds and Edie moaned in approval.
"Beth, oh fuck, please, don't stop. I'm cumming... I'm gonna cum!" Edie thrashed on the bed, her hands grabbing Beth's hair as she did- as Beth dutifully lapped her cunt through the orgasm until it subsided. Beth kissed Edie's thigh and stood up, turning back to Cyrus.
"Now it's your turn. Lay down." He did so, looking lost and excited. She climbed on top and began to push his cock back inside her. She moaned unsteadily and began to ride him.
As she bounced up and down shoving him in and out of her with soft moans she started talking to him. "You like this tight young pussy don't you." She bounced and leaned down, her tits in his face. "You like these young tits?" He groaned.
She grabbed his hands and pulled them around her so they were on her ass. "You know this ass owns you." He grunted and nodded. "Spank it." He slapped it with a pop. She felt him start to pulse. "Cum, cum in me." She said riding faster. "Breed your slutty bitch."
The harsh language sent him over the edge. He groaned loudly and shook as his cock sent burst after burst of cum into her. She relished the feeling of him spurting in her until it stopped. She sat on top of him for a moment, savoring the feeling. She slid off him and rolled over onto the bed. He was laying between Edie and Beth.
They all laid dazed and Cyrus dozed in and out, Beth eventually turned out the lights, but didn't sleep well. "Justine wasn't kidding, it doesn't stay in." She said to herself having to get up to wipe seed that was leaking out of her from her legs and sheets.
Ch. 7: Surprise
Cyrus woke up first the next morning to find Edie had returned to her room and Beth was still asleep. He left quietly to his room (it had no bed but the closet held all his clothes and changed. He checked the pad he had been given for news on his work questionnaire and application and made coffee.
Justine was the first one down and looked bitterly at the not yet full coffee pot. Then her angry gaze turned to Cyrus.
"Did you, Beth and Edie enjoy your little threesome?"
Cyrus put the scone down, unable to take a bite and leaned on the counter. "So, it's unfair to you guys if I feel bad about sleeping with three different girls at the same time, all of whom are a decade or close to it younger than me—but you still get to be upset when I do it? I think we need a new system of determining reasons to be unhappy with Cyrus Rexford." He checked the coffee, still nothing.
Justine brushed red hair from her face. "So, I work super hard to make myself sexually available, spend a whole day throwing myself at you- everything about me screams slut, but when it comes time for a little two girl one guy action you go to Beth and Edie?"
"Tell you what, next time I'm planning on throwing a three person party. I'll make sure you get the invite. As for last night, it just sort of... happened."
"What," She said sardonically, "You went to Beth's room and Edie got caught listening at the door?" There was a long pause. "Actually, I would totally believe that." She shot him one more dirty look. "But I'd better get invited to the next one."
Edie came down stairs next, quiet, and avoiding eye contact and looked in the fridge. Justine called across the kitchen, unwilling to leave the coffee pot. "Hey, you get eaten out last night? Cuz I didn't. I spent the night with the Justine-Lover's special." She held up her middle finger and stormed off.
Cyrus looked at Edie, who looked petrified. "We may need to rent her a second husband just to keep up." Edie cracked a smile, took her glass of juice and left. She passed Beth who was on her way down. Beth smiled at her and said "Hey party girl." Edie blushed and hurried up the stairs.
Beth looked at Cyrus and then checked the coffee pot. She pulled it free and poured a mug. Cyrus' heart sank, as only one cup's worth had been brewed so far. She leaned against the counter opposite Cyrus and sipped it.
There was a brief quiet as Cyrus stared longingly at the mug before Beth spoke. "Did you know that spunk doesn't stay in. It just sort of... seeps out after."
"I did actually yes." He said checking the coffee pot again.
"Do you know if there's anything to do in this town?" She said. "Or do they want us to stay home all day exchanging fluids?"
"Think it's a full community. Movies, parks, jobs all that. It's just new so There aren't a lot of people to enjoy them." He responded.
"Hey new people!" Came Justine's voice from the front foyer.
Beth and Cyrus walked over to the window to look. It was a man and a woman getting out of the boxy transport. The woman was tall, taller than Beth with long brown hair and the man was about the same height. They both were well dressed.
"Wait," Beth said, "Why are there only two of them?"
Cyrus narrowed his eyes. "That's a good point, where are the other girls?" He looked at Beth, "Did they give you the same shpeal about man to woman ratios and population?"
"Yes." Beth and Justine said together.
"Should we go over?" Beth said.
"Pass." Justine said. Beth looked at her. "What if they're a bunch of perverts like us and expect us to share?" She said trying to convey concern.
"They don't look like perverts." Beth said, and turned back to Justine. "And I'm not a pervert."
"You munched carpet on a girl you met two days ago; a girl you share a man with in a polygamous relationship." Justine countered. "Pretty sure that's definitionally perverted."
"That's not true." Beth said, "Edie doesn't have a 'carpet'..." She responded quietly. "And how do you know?"
"These walls don't keep any secrets." Justine said, looking back at the couple.
"Crap!" Beth said, "They're coming this way." They all hurried into the kitchen. The doorbell rang. Then rang again.
Cyrus looked at Beth and Justine, "Either of you two wanna answer it?"
Neither moved. He sighed and drudged to the door. He opened it and the couple was waiting there. The woman was a half head shorter than him and the man the same height. They were clean, attractive professional types. Cyrus suddenly felt unkempt, given his two day beard.
"Good morning!" The man said, extending his hand.
"Hey," Cyrus said shaking it. "Can I help you?"
"We just moved in and wanted to meet our neighbors." He said cheerfully. "I'm Rick and this is my wife Shirley." He peeked around in the house.
"I'm Cyrus, nice to meet you too." He said still uncertain of how to progress.
"Did you reserve a house in this neighborhood or come through the settlement program?" Rick asked.
"I came through the settlement program." He said.
Shirley leaned into her husband. "That's the program I was telling you about on the way here. The one where they give girls away."
"Is that true?" Rick asked.
Cyrus was annoyed by the line of questioning and gave a snarky response. "Yeah, you pick them up on your way out. Kind of like stray cats. Just grab the ones you like."
Rick laughed way harder than was fitting for the joke. "How many they let you walk out with?"
Cyrus' face hardened. "They obligate male settlers to pair with three."
Rick whistled. "Well," He said noting Cyrus' stone face, "Shirley and I heard this planet was being colonized and we signed up and paid for a spot in this neighborhood."
"It was so cheap we couldn't pass it up. We plan to retire on savings and the money we will save living here." Shirley said.
"Retire?" Cyrus said, "You guys are only what? Thirty?"
"Well, the cost of living here is shockingly low, and Rick, sweetie that he is, invested wisely while he was working at a bank a few years ago. He's going to work here a few more years but- at his income level it shouldn't be long before we can live the easy life for good." Shirley explained.
"Lucky you guys." Cyrus replied.
"What did you do before you moved to Gravida?" Rick asked.
Cyrus was exhausted by the neighbors already. "I did ten years in the military. I am living off my savings and benefit payments here until I get hired to work in the area." He said.
Rick whistled again. "Well, thank you for your service." He said trying to sound sincere. "It was nice to meet you, Cyrus. Look forward to sharing the block with you."
"We're having a get together in a few nights," Shirley said, "It's just a little party and dinner for the people who live on this block and the next block." She handed him an invite.
"I think you and your.... Ladies... will be the only settlers there." Rick said.
"You guys just moved in, how are you having a party already? And how do you know we're the only settlers?" Cyrus asked puzzled.
"We were here a few weeks ago, getting everything set up and moved in." Shirley said.
"But we couldn't live here until we got our other house sold." Rick said. "We passed out invites and shook hands then."
The conversation was interrupted when Edie descended the stairs, dressed in a sundress and carrying a book under her arm. She stared at the strangers and hurried into the kitchen.
"I guess it's true what they say." Rick said.
"What's that?" Cyrus asked.
"People really do prefer kittens to cats." Shirley gave a forced chuckle. "We better get going. Talk it over with your..."
"Wives?" Cyrus suggested.
"Yeah, and see if they are interested in a little fun." Rick backed off the porch. "Have a good afternoon." And the turned and left. Cyrus closed the door and wandered back into the kitchen.
"Those people are weird." Beth said.
"I'd have preferred perverts." Justine followed with an uncomfortable shudder.
"We know." Beth countered, Justine shot her a look.
"What's the card?" Edie asked.
"It's an invite to a dinner.... Costume party." Cyrus said as he finally read the invite. He looked up, "Anyone actually have costumes?"
"Nope." Beth said.
"Not a one." Justine followed.
"Me either." Cyrus finished.
They all looked at Edie. "Do you have a costume?" Justine added. Edie didn't answer right away.
"Edie?" Beth prodded. Edie's pale face turned bright red.
"Yes, I brought two with me." She said barely loud enough to be heard.
"What costumes?" Cyrus asked with genuine curiosity.
"It's an ice princess one, and a fairy costume." She squeaked. "When I was with FPSA me and the other rescue girls put on plays and played make believe games. We saw all the movies and shows. We had fun, so I brought them with me."
"Can I borrow one sometime?" Justine asked looking at Cyrus, "I like to play dress up too."
"Stop it." Beth scolded her.
"Do you want to go to a costume party?" Cyrus asked.
"No, it's ok." She said, and turned to leave.
When she had exited, Beth looked at the card. "When even is it?"
"Tomorrow." Cyrus said. He looked up at Justine and Beth. "Tomorrow night why don't you guys go to the movies. I'll buy."
"Gonna try and get Edie to dress up for you?" Justine said with a playful smile.
"Yes, but not like that." He said.
"Can I dress up for you like that?" She asked.
"No. Maybe. Hang on." He said trying not to lose his train of thought. "Edie clearly hasn't adjusted to life here the way it's set up. She's not particularly sexually rambunctious," He shot Justine a look, "She's not really 'go with the flow'. I am going to take her to the party, encourage her to wear her costume and let her have some her fun, not us fun." He looked from one face to another.
"We'll see how long that lasts once you see her in that ice princess costume." Justine said.
"It will last because her in an ice princess costume is too much innocence for me to be ok with... doing stuff to." He said. He shivered. "So, it's settled then. You two find something to do tomorrow, and I'll see if I can't get Edie to a costume party."
"I agree, that's a good idea." Beth said. "Maybe she'll come out of her shell some."
"I don't want her to come out of her shell," Cyrus said. "I just want her to be happy." He poured his first cup of coffee and went upstairs to talk to Edie. He stopped at the first step and sniffed it deeply, then resumed.
He came to her door next to Beth's and knocked. "Its open." She said. He opened it and stepped inside. It was his first time in her room. Cyrus looked around, having not realized how much the movers had done. One wall was covered in books on standing shelves and her bed had a canopy. Every book spine had some variety of magic or fantasy to it.
Edie was sitting cross legged on a blue rug with her tablet in her lap. There was a photo on it. He sat down on the floor next to her and rested his arms on his knees.
"Who are they?" He said looking at the photo of Edie with three other girls around her.
"That's Bella, Winnie and Maggie." She said pointed. "We all got rescued from the compound together. They were my best friends." Her voice cracked. "We used to, pretend to get married to princes, or lovers in whirlwind romances and whisked off to far away places. We traded books about castles and magic. It was an escape. We loved dressing up and make believing; we didn't care if we were too old." She said, a tear sliding down her face.
"I don't want to be here anymore." She said with a sob. "I'm not happy. I want to be back with them. I want to play make believe, not with a penis or inundated with sex at every turn." She sniffled. "I like sex, I used to think about what it would be like on my wedding night- for the first time. But not like this, not as part of some-" She thought for a moment her face growing hard. "Some- breeding harem."
She sniffed again. "I'm sorry, it's not your fault. It's not their fault either. I just didn't want this, I shouldn't have agreed to it." Cyrus wiped tears from her face and moved her hair away.
"Hey, listen." He said, "If you want out, I can make sure you get out. I have people who can help you, get off this colony and find somewhere for you."
She looked at him, her big blue eyes surrounded by red and running make up. "Why would you do that?" She asked.
"Who wouldn't do that?" He responded surprised. "I want you to be happy. I want you to have that whirlwind romance and to find your friends. If you don't want to be here, I do not want to be the one who makes you stay." He moved her hair again. "I don't want you to leave, I like you. You're sweet, and you balance out... the rest of...us." He said uncertain of how to phrase it.
"But I don't want to be the one who makes you stay here if you want to go. If you want out, I can make a call tomorrow and start lining things out to find you somewhere."
"I can't do that to you." She said. "That would be so expensive."
"It wouldn't be that expensive." He said. "Whatsmore, it would be worth it to help you."
She shook her head. "No that's not fair to you."
"Why not? You don't think I'll have my hands full with the other two?"
"Because I can't give you anything back. Because this situation is still better than some of the other options. Because even if you could get me out, and away- there's no guarantees that anywhere I ended up would be any better."
"That's true. For the most part." He said. "Think about it. All you have to do is say so, and I'll make the calls. Until then, see if you can't find that fairy costume."
"Why?" She said
"After all you've done and been through with me... and others. Its time I took you on a proper date." He said with a smile. "Just me, you, dinner, in fairy costumes. No sex, no perversion or sensuality. Just dinner and some fantasy."
She smiled back. "Ok." She looked around. "Wait, do you have a costume?"
"Never had one in my life. I was going to make it." He said.
"You'll need help!" She said excitedly. Hopping up and wiping her face. Her excitement was interrupted by the doorbell.
She looked at Cyrus, "More neighbors?"
He didn't know. He got up and went down the stairs to answer the door. He opened it and almost choked.
Standing in the foyer, in a blue dress- with a thin leather belt wrapped around a very narrow waist stood a slightly taller, curlier haired version of Justine.
"Can I help you?" He said. It wasn't Justine, but they had the exact same face. It was unmistakable.
"Is Justine here? I am here to take her home." The young woman said pushing her way through the door.
"I'm sorry, who are you?"
"I'm Scarlett, her sister. And I am here to take her back home. She needs to face down her fiancé and her family for what she's done."
"What?"
I plodded on through after the description of the females but had to stop altogether after reading stick legs! That shit was not sexy at all and killed both my high and boner!
Keep'em coming (pun intended), I'd definitely like to read more and see where things go. And other than a few minor editing corrections, great job.
...from rating, since this kind of story won't be my cup of tea (threesome). However, I will leave you with what I did like/think you did well with.
The banter between the girls proves lively and sometimes a lot of fun. I first thought Justine was only going to aggravate but I ready 7/8 of it to see there's likely a lot behind that hostility; rationally, she doesn't know Rexford and therefore he didn't create her resentment, so all that she projects comes from elsewhere. Could make for a VERY interesting backstory for the next chapter with Scarlett appearing. You created Edie as a very sympathetic character that leaves her tons of room to grow, especially now that we know why she's so withdrawn--that will prove very interesting on how you develop her character from here. Beth seems a nice counterpoint between the two: she's not throwing herself at him but not uber-shy like Edie. Strictly commenting on the possible character dynamics, you have a lot to work with on the girls.
I buy Rexford's reticence and wanting to be a gentleman. Despite fostering the threesome, I hope you continue with the premise you established for him to be a gentleman with them and that you do develop sound and unique relationships with all of them. The breeding angle suits the story and I can accept that as a premise going forward; all I say is differentiate this story from more common entries that are "wham/bam/thank you ma'am" that focus on the lust, sex and crass talking to the women. Remember that while this is science fiction erotica, readers on the whole consider the best stories plausible and realistic, so as an example if you stipulate he's a gentleman but then all he ever does is bang them like cheap whores, calling them "cumbuckets" and "slut" all the time, no one will believe he's a gentleman and that will create a major disconnect and credibility problem. I immediately think of another author that says one character is such a "kind, considerate guy," but all he does is kink, pounds them like animals and uses them for sex slaves. Will educated and sensible readers think the guy is "kind and considerate"? Hell no. Keep the fiction part of it yes, but also keep it *real*.
I certainly hope you continue accepting constructive criticism like the poster that suggested how to edit. That poster did a tremendous service and balanced the critique well. Never do what some do on here, which is delete helpful posters' comments because it's not 100% gushing praise. The only suggestion I'd add is that if you find one error, use the "find and replace" feature on your Google docs of Microsoft Word; this will catch multiple instances of you're/your and you can fix quick one-off errors like that fast.
Keep writing! Your story has a lot of potential and ending with a kind of cliffhanger for ch 1 has created a good amount of interest to discover what Justine could have done! ;)
Some small part of my mind wanted Beth to be named Ruth so badly-- I must have typed and retyped that name every single time she appeared. Cannot believe I missed one.
I like the story so far, read all the comments and agree with most of them (NOT the one negative about not reading the next post). Good buildup, nice sub-plot intro and you left us with a cliff-hanger! The sex scene dialog and description style was different from most stories on this site, but that was not too off-putting for me. And, there were some errors that proper editing would have caught.
For example in one section you switched the name of Ruth instead of Beth. And in the heat of the moment writing the sex scene you used the wrong pronouns a couple times. None of these were so glaring that it caused me to stop reading.
Writing can be very exciting, as the story comes to life through your fingers, and the rush to get it all down in print while the ideas are fresh will naturally result in spelling and grammar errors. Your readers will expect you to go back, find those errors and correct them before posting.
Here are a few simple things you can do to self-edit your text before you post it.
1. After writing the chapter, take a deep breath and walk away from it to cool down, especially after the sex scenes. You have it on paper (okay in a file saved on your computer) so you can leave it for another day before re-reading it yourself.
2. Come back to read it yourself the next day. Read it out loud, slowly. You will find yourself saying "what?" a few times as you do this, whenever you encounter a place where you didn't write what you meant to write. Some authors recommend printing the piece and actually using a pencil to make corrections. I think for a short piece like this one, verbal would do the trick and for longer, more complex chapters you might want to go with print outs.
3. Make the corrections you found and go back to step 1. Repeat until you find no errors. You will get the hang of doing this quickly. Once you get through the process with no obvious errors you can post it.
4. For more complex story lines, you will need the help of another person to proof read your story. This will be to catch story line problems, not spelling and grammar.
For example see the negative comment about the suburban setting, complete with post office and movie theater on a planet with such a small population that they have forced polygamy.
You might think about explaining this in your next chapter, perhaps by giving the male colonists jobs that the readers would expect in a pioneer setting, clearing land, planting crops, prospecting and mining, etc. The female colonists could be the ones staffing the post office, store, movie theater, etc.
Or, you could have limited the sex to only one of the three wives. This would have given you more room to expand on your world building. And it would have left the readers wondering which of the wives would be next, building suspense for next time.
I enjoyed reading this story and look forward to its continuation. Good first effort.