Dan stared down at her sleepily, admiring this dangerous new creature as if seeing Soo for the first time. In the nude she was so sleek and powerful: a jungle cat at slumber. He had no idea so much passion could be wrapped up in that little body. He traced her sexy spoon shape with his eyes, following the outer contours of her body before venturing inside to ogle her x-rated bits. Below the flat plane of her belly, the puffy mound of her sex rose invitingly, vajazzled with pearls of moisture. Even spent as he was, he was still excited by the sight. Gathering himself, Dan crawled up between her splayed legs and rested his head on her stomach. His fatigued member lolled once and was still, its shiny dome glazed with fuckjuice. Soo stirred, murmuring something about customer of the year and Dan chuckled. As her fingers entwined affectionately in his hair, he thought maybe he ought to allow himself to splurge on takeout more often.
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Thoroughly enjoyed it
good story
suggest a sequel where he fucks her ass and she does ass-to-mouth
Fine story
Many Asian women act shy and innocent. Catching one at the right time is wonderful, they let loose and are very sexy.
@ kaf
really?
You've got ONE submission from 2001, and you're blowing off this submission because of 'laying' vs 'lying'.
Have you, "kaf", volunteered to be an editor -- or are you just a lurker that snarks against minutiae.
You have NOT given CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, so really, GO AWAY [I think that's a better way to say 'FUCK OFF'].more...
"Several lonely nights had ended with him laying in the dark"
What was he laying? Eggs?
The word you want is "lying".
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