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I had a guess that my opponent was ready to concede and staying just out jaws' reach I casually asked the miserable creature if it had had enough.
"Enough? I am defeated -- I concede -- I surrender, I give up, I wish I'd never ever laid eyes on you. I am humbled and defeated... a pitiful wretch of a being. I shall not dispute your passage within the portal! Take it! Go! Please... I can't tell you how embarrassing this is! Oh, by the Great Flame, here it comes again!"
I didn't wait. The way its shit already glowed and burned into the floor, I really just didn't want to know what a really big eruption was going to be like... and if our noses could even withstand it. I grabbed Miranda and dragging her behind me at a ran into the portal and we were gone!
With luck, we would be only thirty minutes or so behind the escaping wizards and our beloved captives!
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Portals are generally pretty quick to instantaneous, having an observable transit time usually of only a second or two, depending just slightly upon distance. This trip seemed to take about five indicating a trip of at least a thousand miles. Very, very long distance for portal travel. The magic required to maintain a portal is rather enormous, even with Arc-Tec and I doubt anytime soon if it's going to ever be remotely commercially viable for transportation. When I came out of the other end of the portal with Miranda's hand still clutched in mine, I discovered how the Deseret folks were keeping this end powered.
We were standing now at the top of a rather tall Aztec style pyramid, at least a thousand feet above everything, now starting at a pair of feather bedecked but otherwise naked priests holding down a naked female sacrificial victim while the equally startled high priest hesitated the downward thrust of his big black bloody obsidian dagger chock full of nasty magics and he gaped with surprise at our arrival.
"Zak! Help!" The captive cried, and at once I got a better look at her face. It was Janice! And like the Lovett Rangers, I'd arrived in the very nick of time! Maybe... if I could stop that dagger from now suddenly heading rapidly to her naked heart!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 11 years agoThat's the only thing you need to fix about your story writing. I've gotten so unused to seeing your characters speak that I pause every time I see anyone speak. Also, you might want to spend a bit more time developing characters. For instance, the brownie. All that I have gotten about him from the story is that he's basically a powerful midget that likes to get drunk.
Otherwise, very nice story.
Anonymousover 13 years agoThis is just pour genus love it beat a dragon with stale corn beef sandwich so funny.
Anonymousover 13 years agothe way you had zak defeat the dragon would of made terry pratchett proud ha!
once again 5 stars for a 5 star story, who needs sex in a yarn this good i ask.....
Rawmaster50over 13 years agoDragons are supposed to be slain! Not with biological weapons but with steel! Very good treatment by the way, your humor keeps me coming back to see what will happen next. 5 stars and waiting for more.
You might be hearing from the PETD people or whoever has issues with the way dragons are treated.
