Creation's Guardian Ch. 05

also those that don't like this series that have been commenting on every chapter all I have to say is "why are you still reading it if you don't like it" move on to another story but if you are going to keep reading stop complaining already.

Love this series and hope it continues. I think that bob should give the gods better larger cocks and the ability to satisfy any woman since it seems that they aren't satisfying the goddesses. that way it wouldn't cause problems between them and bob when the goddesses won't sleep with them but will sleep with bob.

Seriously, what about delectable, mouth-watering, luscious, and succulent... not to mention adjectives that have nothing to do with how good their asses taste? You can use thesaurus.com, among other sites, to find synonyms for word you find yourself overusing. The copy+pasted sex scenes have already been mentioned.

That said, the plot is wonderful, and being a fan of normal people becoming overpowered characters in "isekai" (translated to something like "other world", in which a person is summoned or reincarnated to a fantasy world) genre anime, this story really appeals to me.

It seems like youve run out of ideas to make the sex original and interesting, Bob fucking Hera was pretty much a carbon copy of him fucking Athena for the first time. Bob does the exact same thing to both, and the words you use to describe each situation are almost the same in every encounter, i swear ive read the words "tight, luscious, slick, satiny and diamond" (among others) at least five times in a a few sentences. You really need to think of new descriptors and situations so it doesnt feel like hes fucking the same person with a different name slapped on.

I get it. It's a challenge to create an original sex scene. But copy pasting your old scenes and then changing names is just lazy writing. Either make something new or reduce it to a quick synopsis, don't repeat yourself so awkwardly. They even had the same dialogue, not to mention doing it twice in a single chapter. The storyline is great, I'm honestly curious to see what happens next, but I just scrolled through the sex once I realized what you were doing. You could have spent the minute or two you devoted to those two scenes and done something more productive, like cook a waffle or take a leak.

If you don't want to write an original scene, cool, but don't drag down your talents with lazy writing.