Creation's Guardian Ch. 06

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bob54z
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Selena replied, "I'll be back in a bit master."

When Selena returned Bob and the other five women were in the bed. Cassandra was dozing lightly having already been fucked senseless and Kadir was wailing like a banshee in heat as Bob rammed his monstrous cock in and out of her velvety smooth cunt.

One by one Bob fucked each of the six women until they were all spent and fully satisfied then he called it a night and fell asleep.

TO BE CONTINUED... As usual, comments are always welcome and appreciated.

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Davismarc1995Davismarc1995over 1 year ago
Love it but...

The Hymen is more like an archway than a barrier

 Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

The sex scenes are a little better

 Anonymousalmost 5 years ago
style of writing

A greater variety of style in writing would be an improvement to a great story, most especially for the sex scenes. The sex scenes are good, but rather too short and somewhat lacking in descriptiveness, as the ending to chapter 6 shows. Great story, though, please continue writing!

 Anonymousover 5 years ago
getting bored

I have gotten to the point I am skipping 2-3 pages at a time or skimming until some actual plot and dialog start. The sex scenes are all the same. And everyone talks like high school girls. It is kind of like Harddaysknight's Lady in Red book. getting very repetitive.

 Anonymousover 5 years ago
Well....

I would say this is excellent, but unfortunately you aren't quite there yet. You see, for all their differences they say the same frigging phrases(well, a few variations here and there but the same vibe)! Is Bob THAT amazing? I doubt it--not with the limits being imposed on him. And him being the Guardian makes me think. There's usually an Avenger with equal power running around. Perhaps you could expand on that?

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