Criminal Minds Ch. 03

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"Want you to come, lover," Derek growled, forcing his hips to push upwards as his hand worked Spencer's throbbing organ.

"Oh, Derek," Spencer sobbed with the intensity of the sensations coursing through him. He was teetering on the edge and was about to fly. The motion of Derek's hips pushing upwards, forcing his lover's shaft against his prostate was the last infinitesimal stimulation he needed.

The younger man went rigid on Derek's rod as his orgasm detonated. Creamy come erupted forth as his ass clamped down on the flesh penetrating him. The pearlescent strands of his release were in vivid contrast against the dark backdrop of Derek's skin. His hands were gripping the older man's shoulders with a strength that was sure to leave bruises in the wake of their passion.

The bigger man did not notice the clutching hands. As soon as he felt his lover's body spasming around him, Derek was lost in a vortex of his own pleasure. He could feel his lover's crème pulse against his skin and his mate's sheath contract and relax repeatedly around him.

"Love you, Spencer," Derek cried out as he came. He pumped wave after wave of warm cream into his lover's willing body. He groaned loudly as he arched his back, feeling his release spill into Spencer.

The next coherent thought Derek had was that Spencer was sprawled across his body, breathing hard, as they both recovered from shared ecstasy. He could still feel himself sheathed inside the younger man and gently brought his hand up to cup Spencer' ass. He loved these moments of sated connection.

He knew that if Spencer did not move soon, they would stick together and that their bodies would doubtless protest the awkward positions. However, Derek had no intention of moving. Spencer's breath was warm and moist against his skin and he was happy.

"Love you," Spencer murmured and offered no resistance as his head was framed in strong hands. His lips met Derek's and they kissed tenderly, the love they shared was almost a living entity that ebbed and flowed between them.

Derek accepted that life was not always going to be easy, or a Garden of Eden, however, they both knew that talking was essential. That fears confronted and shared were far easier to defeat than those faced alone. Each man had his own unique strength that they could bring and share with the other in times of trouble. Lola had called each of them a gift for the other. He had shared that idea with Spencer who had readily agreed.

Spencer pulled back to gaze into eyes that reflected the love he felt.

"We'll do this together, love," he whispered.

"Together," Derek vowed and pulled his lover down to taste lush lips once more.

"Life is the flower for which love is the honey." Victor Hugo.

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sensualwhisperssensualwhispersover 8 years ago
mmmmm

As a huge fan of Criminal Minds i was unsure about reading this series, especially as Morgan and Reid are my favourite characters. Spencer is just so geeky sexy. But read it I did and I'm so glad.. You have managed to capture the essence of both characters and weave a story that was very well written. If I had one nit to pick it would be you described Reid as a blonde when he is a brunette (just my gripe). The addition of the quotes was brilliant and added to the overall feeling of "Criminal Minds". The fact that you wrote this as a story, or so it seemed, instead of just porn, which many stories on here are, made it very readable. Fluid use of language made this a joy to read. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great story!

Loved the story -- loved the sex and the shared love between Derek and Spencer. I could really see this scene played out for them -- they seem so in touch and in love in your story line. I'd like to imagine Derek has a nicely haired chest, at least the upper part across the pecs and sternum. Give Spencer something to run his fingers through! That would add to Derek's immense sex appeal!

poshbillionaireposhbillionaireover 13 years ago
Superb

Derek and Reid, my sentiments exactly!!! Well written!

meganjoadamsmeganjoadamsover 13 years ago

Interesting concept. I can honestly say I liked it. Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Very sweet ending.

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