Crucifix: Temptation Ch. 06

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And as he watched all his children grow he couldn't help but thank God for bringing Claudia into his life. Yes, Shannon made a nuisance of herself when she got out of prison. But Brody didn't worry about it, he just let the attorneys handle it. And, 'Dia, Earth Angel' was a smash. His comics sold out as fast as he could draw the new stories. Life was good.

But let us not forget William.

No, he didn't get his scholarship; but, he did go to college. He slowly let go of his anger and decided that God wasn't punishing him. And by doing so, the world around him opened up.

He started to run again, something that he had always loved and even trained in hopes of becoming a paralympian one day. He became a physical therapist that's where he met a fragile, broken ballet dancer, named Erin. But that's another story..........

...{{Erin Durant opened her eyes and saw that damn crucifix dangling over her. William smiled, "Take my hand, Erin. Try again." God, how she hated him. Why wouldn't he leave her alone? She'd never dance again so why should she care if she could walk?...}}

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Delightful!

But man, is that an evil teaser at the end =)

SapphicMojoSapphicMojoalmost 18 years ago
Damn your black heart, woman!

I loved it! I came across Ch. 5 on the top list a few hours ago, and couldn't help plowing through the rest of your work. I hate to sound high maintenance, (Okay, so maybe I don't)but I want more. Is there anything else in the works, and if so, are there any lactating nuns?

Strawberry_2051Strawberry_2051almost 18 years ago
Good set up and story.

I enjoyed the teasing also. In fact, I was a little disappointed that you didn't carry it even further. I enjoyed the characters, even though I felt sorry for the kids.

Aurora BlackAurora Blackalmost 18 years ago
Wow!

I am completely blown away by your talent, and I look forward to reading more from you.

BrowniepointsBrowniepointsalmost 18 years agoAuthor
Author here: Like it? And what about William?

I hope you liked the story. I was told it's more of a Romance than a First Time...but it's also a First Time...Goodness! If you liked the first story, I hope you'll like the second about William. It's in the works and I hope to have it out soon. Thanks so much! Scooterpiebrown...aka...browniepoints...aka... Laura. Bye now!

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